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Chapter 1
The Admirer
Today was my first day at my new high school in Oregon, so I really didn’t have friends but as I was walking home I walked by some pretty extraordinary forest but I thought to myself if I go in I might get lost and not find my way out so I just decided to head home. When I got home I told my parents what had happened at school and on my way back. They told me not to go in the forest alone by myself, so I didn’t go. Everyday as I passed by the forest I felt like someone was watching me but I didn’t stop to see because then my parents would get worried. Then weeks passed and I started to make friends and I suddenly forgot about the forest . Then one day I decided to walk home by myself because I wanted to think a little. So as I was walking home some one called my name but I thought to myself “No one is around”.
Then I heard my name again, “Hailey…”
No one…
“Hailey…”
“Whose there?” I said.
Dead silence.
Then I heard my name again.
“Hailey…” It said.
“What do you want from me?” I asked.
When I said that I started to walk again but someone kept calling my name but this time it was louder and closer.
“HAILEY…” It said.
I kept walking faster.
“HAILEY COME…” It said.
Then I felt someone behind me so I stopped dead in my tracks. No one was their but I felt it so close to me it was as if I felt its breath next to my ear. I turned around. No one. I turned back and no one was their… Nothing but me and the cool, crisp trees. Then I saw sort of like a shadow behind me so that’s when I really started to get scared. At the same time I also had a feeling of excitement washing over me. It was a good feeling but strange, too. Then it called out to me again.
“Hailey.” He said again.
“Who is it?” I said
He replied, “ I’m your secret admirer. I have been watching you from afar ever since you moved to Oregon.”
“Really?” I said
“Yes, I think you are very beautiful.” He replied.
“Well can you come out of the forest?” I questioned.
“I’m afraid I can’t do that…” he said.
“Why not?” I asked
Nothing…
“Are you still their?” I told him.
“Yes I am.”
“Why won’t you come out then?”
“Because I have a secret that I can’t tell you.” He answered seriously.
So I asked him, “So you want me to go into the forest because you don’t want me to find at your secret because then I will tell everyone what I had encountered here? Do you really think I’m that kind of person because if you do then I will tell you right now that I am the EXACT opposite.”
He responded, “No, no its not that it’s just that this is something that no one is supposed to know about.”
“Well I have to go but I’ll come back tomorrow because it is getting late, OK?” I finally said.
“OK, I have to go, too. I have to take care of business later. Bye” He said with a joking tone.
“Bye. I’ll see you tomorrow.”
“And I’ll be here tomorrow.” He said jokingly.
We both laughed. He had one of the most cutest laughs ever.
“Oh, Can I ask you one more thing?” I said
“What is it?” He said
“What is your name? You never told me what your name was. Is that a secret, too, or what?” I said jokingly.
“No that is not a secret. My name is Alexander, Alexander Cuttingham.” He said
“Oh, that is a great name. Mind if I call you Alex?”
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- by Jessicaaa_ish |
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- | Submitted on 08/29/2009 |
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- Title: Purgatory's Angel - Chapter 1
- Artist: Jessicaaa_ish
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I made this story one time when I was bored... XD
I got the idea from the Twilight saga... Ironic huh? lol
Well hope you guys enjoy it and hopefully I will be on the spotlight =D - Date: 08/29/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shizuka Hio1 - 09/26/2012
- are you going to write more?? Because it would so interesting to read more, i really do want to read more! O_O
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- Princess of the Crows - 01/20/2010
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I found there was way too much time passing in the story. The entire story felt rushed and there is a need to flesh out where your character is and what they're like. I don't see the character at all by description or anything...
The chapter needs more details. - Report As Spam
- Jessicaaa_ish - 09/18/2009
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You guys are gonna die
in the second chapter! biggrin - Report As Spam
- UntoldFutures - 09/14/2009
- wow it's pretty good! plz write more to it!
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- onlytheaveragegatsby - 08/30/2009
- w00t. yaay. ^_^
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- Jessicaaa_ish - 08/30/2009
- I'll get on it as soon as I can! biggrin
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- onlytheaveragegatsby - 08/29/2009
- is there more?! i must have MORE MORE MORE. lol. i'm a sap for scary secret admirers. biggrin
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