- One day a little girl named KayCee was packing up for her grandmothers house. She loved her grandmother so much she haden't slept that night. KayCee was so happy it was like she was packing up and moving. "Ok KayCee have a good time." her mother said kissing her on the head. "Bye everyone, I'll see you in a month." little KayCee waved getting in the car. "I be treat her with extra care." the grandmother said. KayCee's mother waved good bye as they pulled out the drive way and already down the street. "So grandma do you get lonely up were you live?" "Well sometimes I do and sometimes I feel like someone is always there with me." the grandmother just smiled. KayCee turned her head out the window to see her friends at the park. "Grandma!" KayCee lightly yelled "What is it?" "Can we stop at the park so I can play with my friends before I leave?" KayCee kindly said "Ok well go for just an hour." the grandmother insisted. She pulled up to the curb and park, KayCee run up too all her friends. A half hour later her grandmother called her name. "KayCee, KayCee!" There was no answer. She stood to her feet and looked around. "KayCee!?" After looking for five minetes she panicked and called her mother. "KayCee is gone, I don't know where she is I looked for five minetes and still can't find her!" the grandmother said half crying half yelling.KayCee's mom came to the park and they looked and looked for hours no sign. Her mother called the police. KayCee had woke up covered in dirt and marks. She peeked out through the bushes and sat on the bench that was in front of her waiting for her mom or grandmother to come. KayCee was so scared and frighted, she sat there for days, and was trying to think, "Where is my grandmother? Why aren't I hungry?" Things ran though her head. KayCee looked up to hear foot steps, Her eyes had came wide openand she jumped to her feet. "MOM!" she yelled and mom didn't even look up. Her mother sat down flowers and a stone. Her mother walked away in sarrow. KayCee bent donw and read "My sweet KayCee lay in peace. We will love you forever and still keep your existance. We want you to be in Jesus's hands and rise up to be an angel looking down protecting us with our love. My Poor Angel."
- by kisa_kun199 |
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- | Submitted on 07/30/2009 |
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- Title: My Poor Angel
- Artist: kisa_kun199
- Description: A little girl KayCee is packing up to go to her grandmothers for a month while her parents get things in the house.Then her and her grandmother goes to the park and she is left alone and for days she sits there watching the world around her. What she doesn't know she is dead,and she crys and yells and know one looks up. The only thing is how did she die?
- Date: 07/30/2009
- Tags: poor angel
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- Akai-Bara Kyuuketsuki - 08/03/2009
- A few spelling errors, other wise a good story.
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- I S u i m i n I - 07/30/2009
- y did she died??!!! lol can u comment me in my profile???!!! well ur story is nice except for this line her and her grandmother part u should change the first her to she!!
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