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he shot and it backfired.shoulder dislocated he ran away. when he got home he relocated his shoulder and got bubbles. dun dun dun. he got macaroni and cooked it. then he put it in a pot and hooked the pot to his toe wich hurtfully broke it. in pain he ran to the first aid and put a band aid on it. (he is such an idiot, putting a bandaid on a broken bone, scream he is dum) he got a sucker, put it in his pocket and jumped off the building feeling confident but ended up in the hospital.
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- Title: clark kent#7 idiot
- Artist: blackman556
- Description: yaeeeeeeey. something bad happens
- Date: 07/19/2009
- Tags: clark kent7 idiot
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Comments (4 Comments)
- I-hit-you-in-your-face - 08/01/2009
- good first sentence''he shot and back fired''i like it.but the rest is ....not the best.keep trying. i also think the first sentence should go like this''his shot backfired.
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/24/2009
- too blunt and short
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 07/20/2009
- No.Ok when your posting something,the storyline may be good,but what keeps people reading also,is how you spell,how you word things.If someone said bill went to store. People might think that it's either a mistake,or you did it on purpose.But if they keep seeing stuff like that they would probably just stop reading.Keep trying though.
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- Snow Crystal101 - 07/19/2009
- strang.... but i liked it!
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