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Rage ran through me as I looked to my best friend, on the ground, lying in her own blood. I screeched a painful, ear throbbing, heartbreaking screech.
Tears stung my eyes as I tried to fight them back. I picked up my daggers and charged forward. He was gonna die, I was going to take avenge for Alex. I clenched my fists so hard with the daggers that I accidentally slit my hand. Unfortunately, that’s what makes the enemy attack.
I silently cursed at the hand, but still charged forward, the daggers aimed at his heart. One made of fire and steel, one made of ice and steel.
Running as fast as I could in black boot high heels, I made it, blocking most of the attacks.
I searched for an opening, none. Wait! There was one. The arm wasn’t blocking it. I moved in swiftly and quickly, kicking the monstrous man in the gut, giving me time to get one in the heart and head. First, ice and steel. I stabbing him, under the ribcage and into the heart. I jumped as he went to take a swing at me. Good advantage, since in the air, my fire and steel dagger licked at the wind, growing bigger. Slam! The dagger fitted nicely in his skull.
His scream in agony filled the whole Combat spar field.
He screeched again, anger this time. He was furious. Fire in his eyes. My heart was pounding as I dared to land on the ground.
He swiped at me with his inhumane claws. I was feeling more scared now then I had been a couple of minutes ago. He got me! Right on the leg and he clung on, the nails digging deep into my flesh. I tried to resist from screaming out in pain and agony, but I couldn’t help it. Then this unbearable pain cut through me. He picked off a chunk of my leg. I screamed again, clawing away from him with my hands. Grabbing my Daggers, I chopped his hands off. I couldn’t believe it. The hands were moving! I was scared, terrified but I saw most of him was turning to dust. That meant I got him in the right places.
Blood poured out of my leg as I saw the ripped flesh on the grass. I felt like I was going to throw up. Next minute, I heard people screaming my names, but I couldn’t focus.
My vision went blurry as Black spots danced in front of my eyes. Then I saw all black.
I saw a white light flashing, my eyes fluttered open and I saw a light was in my face, my friends surrounded the bed. I realized where I was. I was in hospital.
Then it struck me. “Alex! Where is Alex?” I asked, nearly shouting. They all looked down in sorrow and pain. Then realization hit me again. “No! It..She…couldn’t…But!” Were the only words that escaped my lips as I remembered the scene. Her brown and blonde hair was matted in red blood, so was her body.
Sobs came from my chest then out of my mouth as tears streaked down my face, I couldn’t believe she was gone. My best friend. More eruptions of sobs escaped and soon the friends that circled my bed were crying also.
“They couldn’t save her!” Liam said sadly as sadness crossed over everyone’s face.
“I told her not too, She wouldn’t listen. But she’s in a good….” I couldn’t finish the sentence, to busy crying out tears that stained my cheeks.
I cried and cried. I would never see those brown eyes, that smile that made everyone happy.
Her sense of humor I would never hear. But something made me remember. I touched the locket on my chest and opened it. There, in it was a picture of me and alex hugging each other.
I smiled sadly and looked a couple more minutes. “Have a good life, My friend.” I said. It was painful to say it. But I had too.
My friends gathered around to look at the picture and they smiled sadly also. “Everyone thought you and Alex were twins. Because you both had the sense of humor, style and looked a bit like each other with the hair. Also the voice. You guys had similar voices.” Kiki said, fighting tears, remembering the scenes.
We all stared out the window, into the sky. And I swear I saw Alex’s face in the clouds, smiling down at us. We knew she would be happy, dieing in the place of her friends. “Rest in peace.” Kiki muttered softly. “We’ll miss you dearly.” Came out of Jake’s mouth.
“We’ll think about you alays.” Came out of Liam’s.
We’ll celebrate your birthday and the day you died.” Came from Ellen.
“We will always have a part of you. In our heart. So you won’t be alone. “ Came from Gracie.
“We’ll miss your smile.” Was Freya’s remark.
“We’ll miss your laugh and cheerful ness.” Came from Katherynn.
“I’ll always be a part of you, and so will everyone else. You were a part of our little group of being a family, and that will never change.” I said, nearly crying again as we looked still out the window.
I saw some feathers flying into the wind, thinking they could be Alex’s angel wings.
Everyone else turned away except for me. I still looked, and I saw her face in the sky, it was smiling sadly and then it was raining, like she was crying.
“Goodbye, forever until we meet again.” We all muttered as a breezy wind entered the room.
- by XxCuteDevilLivesxX |
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- | Submitted on 07/18/2009 |
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- Title: The Kill
- Artist: XxCuteDevilLivesxX
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Description:
This is about a girl who has a bestfriend called Alex, who dies in a battle with a inhumane monstrous man.
- Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: kill
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 07/26/2009
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Very good! Keep writing, I'd love to read more!
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- VioletNitemare - 07/21/2009
- Good job!! It flows very well and the balance of description is brilliant! ;D
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