- There she was, alone, walking down empty allys. Her name was victoian. She was a sad girl who everything bad happen to. She thought there was no reason for her to be happy. Somethimes in her life she just wanted to run away from eveything just to be alone and able to think things over. But no where she went all she hear were voices. They was sad depressing voices she hear everywhere. Some thing she thought she was hearing thing but what she was hear may ruin her life forever. she was walking down a ally when a young girl came up to her. the girl ws wearing a cheerleading uniform. She sounded just like the voices around her. She looked around and wonder why no one saw the girl just her. She started to talked to the girl but the people around her just looked at her wierd thats when she started to relized that this girl was not alive. She started to run in fear of what scared her most. She ran into her room but the was the ghost. She started asking her question like what was her name and why she came to her. The girl responding saying her name was ashley and that she was the only one who could see her. She was a 6th grade and she was a cheerleader. She said she died in her cheerleading pracice. When someone threw her up they didnt catch her. She ending up landing on her head which cause her death. She was still counfused on why did she come to her , what was she suppose to do? Victorian asked her what did she want her to do? Ashley just staired and said that she need help crossing over but she was afriad to leave her little sister. Ashley started talking about her sister Sarah. Sarah was one year younger than Ashley. Sarah was going to follow her sister in middle school was going to sign up for cheerleading and Ashley was suppose to help her out. With Ashley no longer here she was to afriad to try out, with no one there to help she started being depress more often. One day after school victorian when to the girl's house to talk to Sarah. Someone open the door it was a girl just like Ashely so she guess that was Sarah. Sarah ask her who she was and Victorian just said that she was a friend of Ashley. Then Sarah went into tears down her face and just said her sister had pass away. Victorian said she knew but her sister was still and worried about you. Ashley said even tho I not her you should still try out and that you will be great. Sarah just looked at her with a weird out face. She was thinking, yeah right like this girl could see mt dead sister. Even tho Victorian sounded crazy she felt like she was telling the truth. Two weeks later when the cheerleading tryouts came around she tried her best even tho her sister was not there to help her or even suport her but she knew in spirt she was there. Ashley meet back up with victorian and when she did she saw a bright light coming toward her, all she said it look bright and she was the only one to she it. Victorian told her to go toward it and that she would be happier there. Still worried about her younger sister she when in to the light. Victorian was still alone but now she felt like she had a purpose in life and she knew that every time she got mad she couldn't just run away because now she has people who need her.
- by emofairy23 |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2009 |
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- Title: the spirt
- Artist: emofairy23
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- Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: spirt death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Just_another_Ojama - 07/21/2009
- you have pottential but u need an editor to make ur story stand out
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- vv7722 - 07/15/2009
- Terrible grammar, but great story.
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