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as me and devonn started to walk back to camp, i couldn't help but think how this happened.how did everyone just leave the face of the earth?is this some sort of test or something?why did we not get taken off the face of the earth?the more i thought of this, the more it scared me.
i couldn't believe how much the world changed without all of the other people.everything was just so desolate.there was only buildings and cars.its like we searching a long forgotten planet that everyone left.left for a reason unknown.
then there was the sky.that perfect blue sky.i sat there like nothing happened.no clouds.it was a perfect sky.the sky your family would go to a park and have a pic-nic during.
then devonn stopped."hey,um....pat do you know where we are going?"
"um......crap"i said
we decided to walk a diffrent way this time.thats when we came to a house.this house was diffrent.it had a presence of someone in it.we could both feel it.it wasn't the kind of feeling you get if someone is looking at you.it's when you know someone is just around.
"who should go in?"devonn asked quietly.
"i will"i whistpered loudly"stay here"
"why just you!?!"she asked kind of mad"why?"
"because what if someone is in there and they want to kill us."i said back"i don't want you to get hurt."
"whatever..."she said
"now hide"i said pointing to a car.
"how an i going to get in the car?"she said
"well i ment under of behind the car,but if you can get in it, that would be cool."i whistpered sarcastically.
i walked twords the house slowly.the feeling of someone around got stronger with every step i took.as i hopped the white pickett fence.i couldn't help but turn back to look at devonn.damn she was under the!i would do anything to get of doing this.i had to, though,i don't want devonn to get hurt.i never really wanted her to get hurt my entire life.shes the one person i will never hurt perpously.
i slowly stepped up the steps to porch.each step made my heart pound like there was no tommarrow.as i go on the porch i looked around for something that i could use as a weapon.it didn't have to be an ak-47, just something better than my butterfly knife and lighter i got yesterday.nothing!dammit!
i walked up to the door and went to a side.i did a swat like door opening.you know turn the knob slowly and then slam the door open.i walked in seeing no one was in there.i walked across the roomto see another door.i put my ear against the door.
people were talking.thats when i saw a couple beers by the door i just opened.i popped the cap on one.i took off my shirt and cut a little sliver off.now i was ready to open it.
i walked up with my new monotov cocktail and lighter ready.i started to turn the knob
"who the hell is it!"someone on the other side scream."i'll cap your a**!"
i could hear other people around the room saying get the guns and stuff.thats when i lit the monotov droped it.it shattered all around the carpet.i bolted out of the room, jumped over the stairs, and hopped the fence.devonn ran out from behind the car.as i looked back i saw a group of men with guns.we both ran into the ally way
"go back run that way!look for the others!I'LL BE BACK!"i said scared.she kisssed my cheek and ran off as fast as she could.
now how was i gonna get out of this???
- by themacmillanpage |
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- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: radar [chapter 8]
- Artist: themacmillanpage
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yea i was gonna upload this last night, but i guess i was on gaia too long. cuz i logged me out in the middle of writing it.so obviously, i thought that was perfect, and it gave a little sadness exiting the internet without uploading.
also, i want to know what you think so far about the story.like does it need anything?ciz i just make these stories off the top of my head....
well enjoy chapter 8!!!!! - Date: 07/08/2009
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