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Chapter 1.
A scream was heard from everwhere in the building then came a splash.
Laura came up gasping for air.She caught her breath and looked around.The water was becoming red with blood. Is that my blood she wondered with shock.She didn't feel any pain until she tried to move her left arm.She looked at it trying to deiced if it was broken.
She heard chuckling and looked up to see a man with a sword he looked as if he was about to strike her.She screamed she was sure that this was going to be her last moments alive.She closed her eyes for a second.She didn't want to see her death.She had always been afraid of death and here it was.She was perpared to face it yet.She opened her eyes when the blow didn't come. She looked at the man he still had his sword up but it was in a defensive positoin.
She looked behind her. Alex,her best friend was there. "Don't touch her," Alex growled at the man. The man laughed loudly. "Are you going to protect her?"he asked. Alex nodded taking out a sword and making sure Laura was still in view.He looked at the man with pure hate.
"A-alex whats going on?" Laura said nervously. Alex just looked at her sadly and whispered."I'm sorry."
- by Adriana Pineda |
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- | Submitted on 07/05/2009 |
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- Title: secrets
- Artist: Adriana Pineda
- Description: This is the first draft.Sorry about the spelling I just want to know if this should be a longer story.If you have any ideas pm me.Thank you.
- Date: 07/05/2009
- Tags: lies
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Comments (2 Comments)
- zetsura - 11/19/2009
- Sounds interesting... I like it
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- Puppy Arin - 07/17/2009
- you should write more. its really good
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