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With barely shaking hands he took the cold silvery mass from the shirt drawer it had been so long tucked safely away inside. Lifting it so that he could see the shape in the dim light he fondled his fate in his fingers. His whole body quivered as he pushed shut the drawer and slowly made his way to the rug where she sat, cross legged and illuminated by the same soft light.
It was the first time in a while he had had a chance to get a good look at her. The mere thought of her brought tears to his eyes, his feelings for her ran so deep. He longed to twirl a strand of her dark hair around his pointer finger, knowing he may never get to do so again. But he resisted the urge, giving her a faint smile as he neared her spot.
Giving hm a short nod she slid a single capsule across the floor to his feet as she clutched an identical one in her sweaty palm.
He lowered himself to her level, pausing a moment to look into her deep brown eyes, before picking up the tiny piece of ammo. He steadily opened the loading compartment of the heavy weapon and placed the capsule in one of the holes, where it would be held for an undecipherable amount of time.
He quickly spun the chamber so that the filled hole was undetectable, and snapped it into place.
As was pre decided he was the first to raise the gun to his head. He placed it precisely at his temple, to insure sudden death should the bullet chose him. A single tear rolled down her right cheek as he whispered words of love just before he pulled the trigger.
Her only tear-drop grew to many as she saw the crimson begin to flow from his limp body. The gun fell from his dead fingers while he released his final breath.
Screams escaped her open mouth as she flung herself to his lifeless corpse.
Warm blood stained every article of clothing while she lightly stroked his smooth hair. She muttered his name over again, rocking forward and back with her dead lover in her arms.
Carefully she drew herself away from him, placing him beside her on the rug. She reached down for the culprit that had murdered him and opened the chamber once again.
She put the extra bullet in the first empty space, without turning it, insuring that the first shot was the killer.
She took it to her head, the same spot he had held it just moments before, and fell to his side when the shot was fired...
- by Azlin Takishi |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/21/2009 |
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- Title: Russian Roulette
- Artist: Azlin Takishi
- Description: This is the original form of a story that has now turned into the makings of a novel. The current version is much different, and less depressing. I changed a lot, but still remain partially attached to this version. Written when I was 14, so don't judge too harshly :) (I hope this follows guidelines, I didnt think it was too graphic?)
- Date: 06/21/2009
- Tags: russian roulette
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Comments (3 Comments)
- bloodblackrose25 - 07/04/2009
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*wipes tear* that was so good... im crying.. a lil
.. u could have put a kiss in it!!! *tear* i love it!!! 1 - Report As Spam
- Just_another_Ojama - 06/23/2009
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this is strong got something written at 14.i want my stuff like this.Good job
if u want to write for gold pm me - Report As Spam
- lvhtjsnlwys101 - 06/22/2009
- this is really good. sad but a good story. plz keep writing
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