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Micheal told me what to do
he said "just pick her up and bring your friend to the bar and i will help you out
so he handed me a cell phone and some knockout pills
but i could not bear not to listen to this angel
that was until i saw it i suddendly realized wen i got to her house
why he chose me to do this
i was so young so innocent i started shaking
wen i got to the door i pressed the doorbell
her mom and dad werent home
so her brother answered the boy that really was like a angel
he smiled sweetly and said in his bass voice"welcome"
i suddenly realized i loved him and not Micheal
then i said is "Katy home?"
he said "ohh your the one she was talking about."
so she got downstairs
i would miss that sweet little girl
she was younger than me
well we got to the bar and she went to use the bathroom
i called Micheal and asked "wat should i do now?"
he said put the"pills in her drink."
so i did
then she came bak
i switched the drinks
and forgot about the pills
i drank it
she called Micheal and asked if he was my friend
he said he would be there right away
i felt a slash of pain
i opened my eyes to see Micheal with a knife and blood coming out of my hand
i cryed
then it was all over
i was in red water
gone
- by popsinger102 |
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- | Submitted on 06/12/2009 |
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- Title: i dont kno wat it should be
- Artist: popsinger102
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Description:
so hey all you ppls help i can not wright and i need help
commants and helping words plz - Date: 06/12/2009
- Tags: dont should
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Comments (6 Comments)
- hiran cc - 03/21/2011
- i think that was great! there were a few spelling mistakes, but it was still understandable and really enjoyable to read. fantastic job :]
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- XxX Baby Maia XxX - 09/04/2010
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- night_sky_moon_day - 06/21/2009
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This story has potential. If you
want I could help. Just PM me
and I'll give you some ideas. :]
I also have ben writing. you should
read it. It's called Ryter.
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- Brandi_is_Death - 06/13/2009
- if u want a sequal to it... that would be cool... it cool be about her waking up in the hospital but ... her moniter read: ______________________ no signs of life @ all
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- Brandi_is_Death - 06/13/2009
- That was soo sad... i loved it! 5 stars
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