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Chapter 2 New place new paths
So one day I a-woke in my bed hearing the sound a the moving trunk.
I got up and looked around my old room well it will be my old room as soon as I leave.... Lets face it looking around my boxed up house(standing for our stuff like clothing, jewery, photos, frames, ect...)you feel upset like you don't want to go...and I didn't. Than I heard my mom from outside calling my name,
"Lurna-LURNA!"
"Yes mom?"
"Common down and get ready to go grave the brake-able boxes too!"
(what she ment was the box with stuff that could easily brake)
I graved it and ran down stairs and gave it to my mom as I got in the car...taking on more look at my old house...
"Goodbye old house" I said trying to be funny, but just got stared at by Fred but...he laughed just to brake the silence.
"So honey you ready to go?" Asked Fred to my mother.
"Yes sweety." She said sweetly and kindly.
I never thought I would have to leave but theses things happen right?
I fell asleep in the car like I normaly do...
When I awoke looking around from the car windows the town was...shadowed by misty, foggy clouds...kinda looked spooky.
I looked at a sign and it read Burma population: 68,883
"Well I guess now the population is 68,886 now."I said waiting for a responce... I never got one.
I looked out now this place got more and more creepy by the mile...
The people look like the walking dead...
When we got to our new house we got everything settled in nicely.
Fred's old friend came over happily greeting us with a bottle of white wine. His name was Clark he had a daughter who would be going to the same school as mine...her name was Anna Mirlth. She wore all pinks, greens, and yellows mostly she said it helps brighten up the dull town.
I than started to think here I am and now I got to take some new paths to find my way into happiness...but can happiness even be found?
Chapter 3 coming soon
- by xXxiDarkRosexXx |
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- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: Bitten Chapter 2
- Artist: xXxiDarkRosexXx
- Description: Chapter 2 go to my posts to read chapter 1 chapter 3 is on it's way...soon...
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: bitten chapter
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- br0kenwolf - 10/06/2009
- just like to add that you should enlarge the chapter a little more and show more details but its a promising story althougth a bit of a ripoff from twilligth sorry just saying what i think if you need some inspiration check out my story
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