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I entered the room
I tried not to think
I felt a tear in my eye
While being pushed to the end of the room
I never wanted to die early
But if Im dieing in the place of my true love
Then maybe death wont be soo bad
Even though it might be hard to accept
I tried to keep back my fears
And put them in a locked up box
I tried to think of happy thoughts like the first time I saw him
That day was packed with joy and glee
I felt anothor tear roll down my cheak
I would have wiped that warm tear off if my hands werent tied up
Gosh I just wish I could run into his arms and hug and kiss him one last time
But I knew that can never happen
My heart whimpered as a masked man shoved me against the wall
I looked up with a trembling body
Cause I knew I would be dead in a few minutes
A few very short minutes
I looked up one more time
And saw the masked man loading his gun
I couldnt take it
I was trembling out of control
Then I thought to myself
What is he doing
I sighed
Probaly crying in bed in a world of sorrow
I sighed an even heavier sigh
If I wouldnt have sacrified myself
He would be dead
I said to myself trembling
I peaked over at the masked man again
And saw him coming towards me with a gun in his hand
This is it
This is were I die
A tear rolled down my face
I tried to be strong
Then I thought of him
His hair, his smell, his body, his smile
Soo I took a picture of him from my mind
And stared at it for my last moments
I tried to be happy
I tried to accept death
I tried to enjoy life
The masked man placed the gun against my head
While I was still staring at the picture of him in my mind
The last words I said were
Goodbye my t-
- by Panda the QT |
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- | Submitted on 05/17/2009 |
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- Title: The Day I Died
- Artist: Panda the QT
- Description: It is a bit sad but it is kinda romantic at the same time. I was sad when I wrote this soo yeah and this is my first story Ive ever entered on gaia. Soo please leave a comment!
- Date: 05/17/2009
- Tags: died
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Comments (7 Comments)
- etthepirateninja - 08/03/2009
- I like it alot! 5/5
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- Dragons Willow - 05/26/2009
- i got so into it that i was rather left wanting for "his" name. actually the romantic side of me wanted the "executioner" to be her man in disguise, there to rescue her and kill all in his way...but that's just my rosy view of life for you. awesome!
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- Panda the QT - 05/24/2009
- Gosh! im soo mad! I wanna enter anothor story on gaia but it keeps freezing up every time I do it!
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- Princess Nimph - 05/23/2009
- good job, I like it
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- Juliet Wolfgang - 05/20/2009
- it was really sad. good job at adding emotion. almost made me cry.........
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- Panda the QT - 05/18/2009
- I proboly could of done a better job on this
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- Panda the QT - 05/18/2009
- Im a horrible speller
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