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*it's halloween night. the full moon is out, little kids are trick or treating, teens are egging and tee peeing house, and haunted houses are set up to scare those brave enough to go in. me, i'm too old to go trick or treating anymore, and i'm not a dumb little trouble maker going around and egging houses. so you could say i'm going with the third choice of going in haunted houses, though the one i'm going in doesn't have people wearing dumb make up or wigs. no, the one i'm going is completly empty. lucky me right? the one day a year i decide to be brave and do a bunch of dares, someone has to come up with this one. armed with only a flashlight and the cloths on my back i head into the house for my over night stay*
well, here goes nothing*i take one last look at my group of friends on the cracked and weeded over sidewalk before climbing up the old, creaky steps of the house toward the front door. the house itself is a 3 story old victorian style house. although the style of the house is very nice, the house itself has seen better days, though i'm sure i wasn't even alive when it was. it's yard has grass almost up to my waist and the shingles are broken and almost falling off, the roof has a hole in one corner of it, and the black paint is faded and peeling. i turn on my flashlight before opening the front door and walking inside the dark house, reluctantly shutting the door behind me.*
*'ok, this isn't as bad as you think kay. all you have to do is stay here till 6 am tomorrow. it's 10 now, so you only have to be here 9 hours. that's not bad. you can just sleep the whole time....'i look around the massive house, noticing that for an old house it's surprisingly clean, with barley a speak of dust on anything. i point my flashlight around the rooms a little, deciding to do a little exploring before i go to bed. while looking around on the first floor i exploor the living room, dining room, and kitchen, surpisingly the only dusty place so far.'huh, that's weird. why is the kitchen the only dusty room down here?' i go over to a door and open it to see it leads down into a pitch black basement. a shudder runs up my back and i qucikly shut the door.* no way i'm going down in a basement. i'd rather be mauled by dogs.*i head back to the main room and cautiously climb up the staircase to the second floor. for some odd reason there are lit lamps along the walls in the hallway. 'that's so werid. who leaves a house empty but leaves the lamps lit?' i keep my flashlight on and head down the hallway till i get to a hall with a bunch of doors. when i try to open them i find them all locked. i keep walking in the halls, trying to get the doors open to no avail. i end up sitting on the floor by a window at the end of a hallway, looking outside at the sky.'okay, i've been here almost an hour and a half, just 8 and a half left to go. i just hope i don't get lost in here.' while sitting by the window i start to get the feeling i'm being watched. i decide it can't be true and that i'm just freaking out for nothing. both the hallways i'm by are lit with the lamps and don't have shadows anywhere.'man, i watch WAY too many ghost shows. i'm freaking out over nothing. i just need to stay calm and don't lose it.' even though i tell myself that a million times, i can't shake the feeling that somewhere someone's watching me. *
*after a while i get up and head down the hallway to get to the third floor of the house, constantly looking over my shoulder to see if someone's following me only to find nothing there.'ok, i really go to stop watching ghost shows...' as i climb the stairs to the third floor the steps creak loudly and the air feels colder the higher i go. i get to the top and see a hallway with 9 doors. as i start walking down the hall the feeling that i'm being watched gets stronger. as i reach out for the door handle of the first door i hear footsteps echoing off the walls, making me stop dead in my movement. suddenly the lights in the hallway go out, leaving me with just my flashlight as my only source of light.' oh god oh god oh god, what the hell just happend? oh god, i knew i should have just dressed up and gone trick or treating.' the sound of the foot steps get closer and soon i hear them in the hallway coming toward me. i turn and run down the hallway away from the footsteps, only to come across a dead end.'s**t! this isn't good, now i'm trapped.' i turn with my back to the wall and shine my flashlight in front of me, only to see an empty, quiet hallway.'huh?...what the hell just happend? i could have swore i heard footsteps.' just then i hear someone breathing next to my ear. the blood drains from my face and i freez, slowly turning my eyes to see two glowing red ones staring at me.* Aaaaaahhhhh!!*i break into a sprint down the hallway, almost tripping and dropping my flashlight as i run down the stairs onto the second floor. when i turn a corner i look behind me. big mistake. when i do i see not one, not two, but THREE pairs of glowing red eyes coming after me, the now out lamps in the second floor hallway preventing me from seeing anything else.'oh god, if i live through this i'll never watch another horror movie for as long as i live!!' just as i get close to the stairs that go to the first floor, as luck would have it, i trip and fall on the floor, my flashlight falling out of my hands and rolling down the hallway.* oh....no...*i say quietly to myslef as the footsteps stop just inches from me. i slowly turn my head to look up at the glowing red eyes. with the little light from my flashlight at the end of the hallway, i can tell that the three things are wearing black cloaks with weird red clouds on them. the one who's face i can see has pale skin and slicked back white hair. he grins down at me, revealing his two sharp teeth.*
Hidan-hehehehe well well well, look what we have here guys, our dinner has come to us.
Kakuzu-yes, and she smells like a virgin too.
Itachi-mmm they always taste better when they're virgins. should we tell the others?
Hidan-hehe no, lets keep this tasty little thing to ourselves. you know leader will only want to hog her to himself and suck her dry before we can even get a drop of her blood.
*i stare up at them, too scared to try to crawl away.' n-no way....they can't be.....there's no way.....vampires don't exsist.....'before i can do anything else the shortest one with black hair picks me up and pins me to the wall, the other two moving in close so i can't get away and run*
Kakuzu-who's getting the first bite?
Hidan-tch me of course. i found her so i'm the one who's going to drink her blood first.
p-p-please, don't hurt me
Kakuzu-*chuckles a little*hehehe i just love it when they beg like that, looking so innocent and vulnerable.
Hidan-yeah, and hearing her blood pulse rapidly like it is just makes me want her more*he moves closer to me and moves his head close to my neck, his cool breath hitting my skin, making me shake all over*
Itachi-hehe don't worry, it only hurts for a couple seconds
Ka-and feeling all your life and energy drain from you will make you numb to pain*just as hidan is about to bite my neck the lights in the hallway suddenly turn on*
Hidan-*hisses a little, looking down the hall at the reason for the lights coming on*grrr back off, we found her first. you can't have her blood.
Leader-*a man with pale skin, firery orange hair, and piercing red eyes with piercings all over his face glares at him*you know the rules hidan. if a kill is found in the house everyone is entitled to have his share of it's blood.
Hidan-grrrr Damn It!!*he punches the wall by my head, making me yell out a little and shake more, only slightly relieved he was stopped from biting my neck*
Leader-*glares at him*you're going to fix that later hidan*he walks over to me and roughly grabs my wrist and yanks me down the hall, the other three following behind him.'w-what's going to happen to me now?' he pulls me up the stairs to the third floor and a door opens to a large, almost empty room. the only thing in it are light torches along the walls, some chairs by a long table and some scary looking tourturee devices hanging on the wall. *
*he pulls my over to the table and shoves me i a seat*
Leader-stay put woman. and you three, don't touch her till i get the others*leaves*
Kakuzu-great, now we're going to have to share her.
Hidan-yeah. even seeing her shake like a ******** leaf over there isn't going to make me feel better.
Itachi-just be happy he's not hogging her to himself.
Hidan-yeah i suppose*sits in a chair at the table along with the other two. a minute later the man from before walks in with 5 other pale skinnned, red glowing eyed men. they stare at me hungrily while taking a seat at the table. the orange haired man stands me up and rips off my clothing and tosses me onto the table, taking a seat at the head of the table.*dinner is served.
*they grab my arms and legs so i can't struggle and bite me, the orange haired man biting into my neck, all of them drinking my blood hungrily. before they have a chance to drain me of all my blood the orange haired man stops them.*
Leader-don't drink all of her blood men, otherwise we won't have any left for later.
*they all grin down at me before leaving, licking my blood off thier lips. the orange haired man bandages up my wounds where they bit into me and carries me into a room and sets me down on a bed. too weak to do anything i'm forced to let him place his cold hand on my crotch*
Leader-you're virgin blood is really delicious my dear. keeping you around will be worth drinking your blood.*he covers me up with a blanket before leaving me in the dark room alone, where i'll be for the next couple of days before they decide i'm strong enough for them to drink my blood again.* The End
- by lil lover of music |
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- | Submitted on 05/16/2009 |
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- Title: A Halloween Night
- Artist: lil lover of music
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This is just a little story i did aobut the akatsuki guys being vampires and me having to go in their house for the night.
i hope you like it and plz rate and comment.
if you would like to see more of my work go to my deviantart: http://kthies15.deviantart.com/ - Date: 05/16/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- The Grooster - 11/01/2009
- No problem. Happy Halloween!
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- The Grooster - 10/31/2009
- Not bad, not bad. The Akatsuki are awesome. Making them vampires turns them into even cooler bad guys. I'm just asking, but could you rate mine? I have 15 chapters but I made a Halloween Special called Aric and Miran's Halloween. Thanks, and well done on this.
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- TrixieLoveRose19 - 09/26/2009
- Awsome 5/5 rate mine? Vivian's Blood?
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- PrettyCureFresh - 05/23/2009
- cool
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