- 13 year old ema and 9 year old ben are moveing into a nice big, glorious house in the country and they dont get along to well but they still love echother and they are unpacking when emas phone rings "bring bring" and she answeres it... its a very low deep voice and the person on the other line says "this is death and i shall strike your family tonight" ema hangs up because she thinks that it is just a prank call and gets on with her life but then later that night she hears a scream and a big "bang" like as in something falling to the floor and breaking so she runs down stairs and sees ben laying on the floor with a broken vace all around him and he is bleading from his head... ema screams "no" her parents come running and see it and they said to ema "what happened" she runs into the foyer and sees her phone light up on the center table she picks it up its the same number and she answers it and the man answers and says "i told you so" then she whipes her phone across the room and it shatters when it hits the floor... she says "well that didnt help at all" and goes up to her room and starts crying.... was this an accident or did someone help the vace fall on his head... who knows... eek
- Title: The private number......
- Artist: doh_girls
- Description: 13 year old ema and 9 year old ben are moveing into a new home with there mom because there parents just got a devorce. thats preaty much all i can say without giveing some away because its a short story... but read the story plz its a good one but i dont have that good of puncuation though...
- Date: 05/14/2009
- Tags: death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CaptainAwesome998 - 05/30/2009
- Wow. A whole paragraph in one sentence.
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- Hezzarther - 05/14/2009
- Grammar. Use it.
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