If I Fall, Will You Catch Me?

• Artist: Fayne Darkness
• Description: I made this little fella today in school. I was that bored, and I had nothing better to do, anyhow.
  So, I hope you enjoy, and shut up with the comments about it's terrible if you think so, please. I specialise in fiction, and myths.
  Just visit my submissions for proof.
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: fall will catch

It never worked, there was nothing at all since we started.

"Come, when I fall-"

There was nothing there-

"-There will always-"

Nothing since it began-

"-Be a way to end it all, to start over."

Nothing when it comes to things that matter.

"Nothing catches-"

Why will I fall?

"-You when you miss-"

Will I make it?

"-It's not worth the try-"

Will I die.

"-Nothing is a fantasy."

It will never work out-

"Why won't you-"

-In the end, never again-

"-Fall with me?"

-Nothing is what it seems.

"There is more to this-"

How can you expect me to fly?

"-Than what you think."

With broken wings.

"No. It's not the same."

How do you expect me to soar?

"The hell it is,-"

My wildest dreams.

"-Fall with me,-"

I have fallen so far down, into a hell of my own mind.

"-Stay with me,-"

But all I can do is smile,

"-Never go."

And pretend everything is okay.

"Fall, make it last."

Nothing is what it seems.

"Take my hand,"

Ntohing is perfect.

"Fall with me."

Nothing is right.

"If I fall, will you catch me?"

Comments

[xSharpiix]

I love it.

[Fayne Darkness]

*Totally lost* Did I write this? o.o I can't remember, but now that I think about it, it's familiar XD (Just goes to show you how bad of a memory I have)

[a_VAMPire-s_deAth_KIss]

I think it's really beautiful.

[Fayne Darkness]

Yeah sorry about that. I was ind of in a bad mood.
I don't really mind any kind of comments, really. smile

[isthaasztra]

You say that you want people to shut it about the comments about it being terrible - if you are scared of people giving critiques, why do you post it? is "Nice, its good" all you want to hear? In that case, I don't understand your reason for writing it.

It is good though.

[Nanatsuiro-Rainbow]

I think this is pretty good.

[cowboy gabe]

nice 9/10