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I came home from work and when I got in my house there was blood there was blood every where. What had happened? I asked my self over and over again. As I stared at what now was the remains of my little sister, I could feel my eyes stining and tears running down my face. I started to call 911 when someone poked me in the back i turn so quickly that i felt the woooshing of my hair hit my face. There was no one, I turn back and then someone started talking. I could not make out the face in the dimmed light but I'm very convinced that it sounded like James my old boyfriend. And sure enough it was.
"WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?" I yelled as I turned on the lights.
"Me? I had to kill her!" James replied with wide eyes
"Why?" Was all I could say
"Because I want you to come to the night world with me," James said as his face went pale. He said "Im a vampire, I'm sorry that i havent told you."
"NOW WHY SHOULD I BELIEVE THAT VAMPIRES ARE REAL?" I shouted.
"Ohh they are all right, if you don't believe me come here," James replied darkly.
So I went up to him and he pinned me down with one hand and said "Do you believe me now?" I said no, so then he started cutting my arm and sucked blood.
I felt like I had passed out and said "Ok ok ok stop I believe you" He pulled away his fangs still sharp and his eyes tense and sliver.
"Ok," Was all he said.
- by q109827501938291 |
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- | Submitted on 05/02/2009 |
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- Title: the loss
- Artist: q109827501938291
- Description: well its not a true story but i thought of it when i was bored and had nothing to do so i wrote this and im not telling any more till i get some comments bout it so plz rate it!!!!!
- Date: 05/02/2009
- Tags: loss
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Xx_Fallen_Sacred_Angel_xX - 05/14/2009
- poor punctuations and there was not enough to draw me in it was all over the place 2/5 for effort
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