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Intro
"None have lived through what i have, death, plague, war, and immortality. I'm cursed to walk this Planet of Sin until the end of time. I never wished for it to happen, I was just at the wrong place at the wrong time. I was there for the fall of the 300 spartians, the Civil War, the Titanic's sinking you name it, I've lived it. Just let it all end..."
The Immortal Man on Eternity
Prologue
New York City, New York 1945
He walked with a large frown on his face, he should have been cheering like everyone, but he wasn't. You see the world had just learned of the death of Hitler and everyone was happy because the chaos was finally over, but it wasn't. This one man knew Hitler so to speak, and knew that he was immortal just like him so it was impossible for him to be dead. The man grinned as he thought about the day where the two would fight and only one would live, you see killing the unkillable was this man's only hope to be free from immortality.
Chapter 1
New York City, New York 2010
"well I haven't heard any thing on your chaos since you faked your death "Hitler", for a while i thought you really were dead" Jack said as he looked down to the man from his chained wall prison. "I thought I'd go into hiding for a while you know? Oh and remember the name is Alister." Alister explained.
"Now, now Alister you know the rules it has to be a fair fight, so why am i chained to a wall?" Jack said mockingly. "because i found a sword called the Curse Breaker, it breaks only a single curse in it's life time and this sword hasn't been used" Alister said as he untied the chains and let Jack fall to the ground. Alister lunged at Jack with the sword, but jack jumped back and picked up a nearby hammer. Jack struck the sword with the hammer causing it to split in half, Jack dropped the hammer and picked up the sword fragment, he jumped back and created a fire wall with his powers and yelled "MAYBE NEXT TIME ALI!" as he ran out of the building.
to be continued......
- by Doctor Graybles |
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- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Eternity On The Planet Of Sin
- Artist: Doctor Graybles
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(Part 1 sorry wouldn't fit in the title)
The story of a man and his never ending war with his rival Alister. - Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: eternity planet
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Comments (2 Comments)
- LexyCobriana - 07/03/2009
- really? originality would be nice.
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- Lexi0927 - 04/27/2009
- Wow this is amazing!
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