dont forget me...part 4

• Artist: Aroused Nintendo
• Description: read part 1,2,and 3 to understand the story.
• Date: 04/25/2009
• Tags: dont forget mepart

were we left off.
while in the car hiroshi stayed looking at the window. He new this would be the last time he'd ever see the town,the school and emiko again. that was the last time hiroshi would never see emiko...for the moment.Days pasted,then months,and then 4 years had pasted.
4 years later, emiko and her friend Azarni, are ready to face high school. after that day,4years ago emiko never though of hiroshi or ever though about getting a new boyfriend. meanwhile while emiko and azami are still walking to school, in the hallways hiroshi stands. Hiroshi also ever though about moving on..but he never forgot emiko. "so your new here?" says a boy watching hiroshi. "not really, i been here before but that was a long time ago" hiroshi replied. "so whats your name?"says unknown boy. "Dansuke hiroshi nakamura. but everyone calls me hiroshi, but you can call me daisuke if you wont" said hiroshi. " ok i'll call you daisuke" repiled boy. "oh btw my name is Akio" said boy. mean while outside, emiko and her friend finally made it to school.
to be continued...

Comments

[Hezzarther]

I like the story, but you should work on your writing technique. -Grammar. -Punctuation. -Details. Stuff like that. You should also make your parts longer. It's a pretty good idea, though.