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Prolouge for Chapter Two
After you kill someone, are you supposed to leave the weapon you used as evidence you won? That's how I think it should be. At least right now anyway.
~Susan~
Chapter Two
My soul bag felt heavier than it did yesterday. This made me smile. Tammy's soul was a very good thing for me. I just wondered what it would have tasted like. The souls in the bag were restless at my new soul in the bag.
My head felt lightheaded and couldn't feel my feet. Maybe I needed a better soul. I hoped that was the case. I could see people gathering in the area of the allyway. They were gathered around something, but, what was that something. Amazingingly I could see a body. Who's body was that? A better question, why did it look like Tammy?
For the first time ever, I thought I felt fear. Stepping into the crowd, my face became hot. The people looked down at a woman. It was Tammy.
"Oh!" I exclaimed. My face suddenly turned sour. I hated the fact that bodies always turned up, even if they turn into dust. Grabbing a woman's hand, I began to cry. The woman looked at me.
" H-h-help me!" I yelled at her in between fake sobs. Her face went into a sympathetic twist of sadness. Sadness she felt for me. It was simply pathetic how humans acted like they knew everything. I thought for a moment how Tammy wanted to take me to an orphanage.
" What is wrong, little one?" The woman asked in her british accent. How much did I hate british accents? A lot. Yet another annoying woman called me little girl! This one would feel more pain than Tammy did.
" That's my mommy!" I screamed out in a pitiful rage," Take me to the policemen so I can tell them what I saw!" I wanted a nice man to kill. They always get in the way in the end, so, I figured one of them gone would tell those people how strong I really was. All I wanted was a good meal now.
" Okay young one, I'll take you to the policemen's place. There you can tell them who killed your mommy," she said in a empathetic voice. Everything just seemed so easy now.
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The woman took me near the ally, people could see us, but, if I ran into the ally and she followed, then it would be easy. This was the same place where Tammy and I were before I killed her. Then, I took off at sprinting speed into the ally, and, just as I was hoping, she ran right after me.
" Wait!" she yelled," The policemen are that way!" I giggled just a little bit. I still had the bloodstained rock that I used to kill Tammy with and I really liked using it as I weapon. This time, I'd leave it as evidence that I won in both little attempts to kill people. This time, they'd know that Susan Treecoff killed two women and is going to strike again. This time, they will have to find a man easily. I will make sure the body turns up when I kll the poice officer. For now though, I'll have to stick with this woman.
" Little girl, little girl! Little girl, wait! You are going the wrong way!" She screamed. Her feet were slower than mine, yet longer so they were starting to catch up. With instinct, I turned around around angrily. My hand raised high above my head, laid a hard blow right on her cheek. With the rock in hand I raced to tackle her. She, just like Tammy, tried to get away from me. This time I kept the rock in hand and reached for my soul bag. In a quick swipe, I grabbed a soul, which immediatly turned into a dolly, which I called, the dead dolly. It sort of remended me of a slave or puppet, doing anything I commanded.
With a quick jump, I landed right on her back. This dolly still seemed angry, which made me one happy person. The dolly flew me to the woman. She cried out in horror. The look on her face was better though. It made me think of a horrified mouse trying so hard to escape from a snake. I dropped right on top of her, taking the rock in hand again. Instead of a simple hit, like I did to Tammy, I threw so much force into hitting her with the rock that I could hear her bones crack. Even after I knocked her out, I continued to bash her face in.
" That's what you get for," I paused enough to hit her again and let the blood hit my face," calling me a little girl! I am Susan, and you are my newest dead dolly!" I hit her face again and again with the rock. Now I could actually see chunks of bone. I'd scraped part of her skin and muscle away. I stopped here. Looking down at the woman's face happily. I dropped the rock on her as if she was a peice of trash and returned the dolly to my soul bag.
My pale blonde hair fell over my shoulders with stains from the blood in my hair. I'd have to wash up before paying a visit to the police.
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The walls looked unfamiliar to my stinging eyes. Since all the shops were abandoned, I could find one with a bathroom and wash up in there. I found one and walked in calmly. No one was in this shop so I made sure to grab a few things I could use as weapons and hid them in my pockets. Now, I walked into the restroom and turned on the sink. The smell of blood flowed into my nose. This was probably the best thing that ever happened to me. I quckly washed of my body and made another sad face.
Soon after, I walked out of the ally and twords the place where that woman had been talking about.
" My day has been on of the strangest I've experienced in quite some time. that rage of mine, let me kill that infernal woman," I said looking down to my hands. In the place I stood, I let out a chuckle. The chuckle sounded like someone who had taken over the world or something.
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- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Lost- Chapter 2
- Artist: iiLady_Avian
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I've just made the first chapter and am working on the second. I wonder how many peope will vote. Please comment and rate on this, for I know the last one wasn't very good. ell, tell me I did something wrong and have fun reading it. ^.^
By the way it is kinda gorey twords the end, just wanted to let you people know.
For all you people who like it, the third will be out next week. - Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: lost chapter2 susan death
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- cookiemonster05679 - 04/26/2009
- Don't listen to what the girl below me says, you have excellent writing and no one can deny it. Good job 5/5.
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- MapleandAsh16 - 04/25/2009
- I like it. Though the gorey parts could use some work, otherwise it was good.
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- iiLADY_Arachne - 04/25/2009
- biggrin love this story
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- iiLady_Avian - 04/25/2009
- Read the description to know more about the story.
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