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The Stranger
My heart was pounding. I was afraid to go in but i knew i had to.
The body was shaking all over as my arm slowly turned the knob and carefully pushed the door open.
I gasped.
He was there. My grandpa, the only person i loved in my family...dead...
He was on his rocking chair, it seemed as if he never even got out that chair, and i dont think i have ever seen him get up either!
His eyes were still open with a look of shock spread across his pale, white face.
He had wrinkles everywhere, just like the last time i had seen him but the only difference was the red.
Blood.
Blood everywhere, on the floor, on his chair, his face, everywhere.
I tried to control myself, but couldn't help let a tear slowly roll down my cheek.
I couldn't breathe properly and had to take a deep breath before i got my body moving again.
I knew who did this, i was the only one who knew, but no one trusted me.
They think im just a child, a silly kid, nothing more, but im not, i know more than they will ever know, and i will prove it to them.
But how?
It hit me, a trap, thats what most people do...i just hope mine would actually work...
My face turned determined.
I slowly wiped the tear and made a promise.
A promise that i would avenge my grandpa and get rid of the murderer.
For good.
- Title: The Stranger
- Artist: Chokwit
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Description:
Um this is my first time entering a story -.-
It might not be that good and im not very experienced, but i hope you like reading it!
Im making it up as i go, and i sort of got an idea of what the story is going to be about...i hope >_<
Anyways, here goes, oh by the way, its only a small part of the story, kinda like after the beginning, agh, im not making sense am i?! - Date: 04/19/2009
- Tags: stranger murder death avenge
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Miss Idependent - 04/27/2009
- i really liked it biggrin
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- Miss Idependent - 04/27/2009
- i really liked it biggrin
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- Chokwit - 04/19/2009
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Aww, yay you commented!!!
-Huggies-
And thank you biggrin - Report As Spam
- Dreamzi - 04/19/2009
- OMG THAT IS THE BEST!! I LOVE IT!
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