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As the sun come up form a battle field in hell the remains of lost demons lay scattered over the land. it was a monsterous battle as the demons form the land of lust came down and lay waste to the brave devils of the land of greed.
one devil little than a human child walks the battle field searching for his mother. His name was Hejo and as he walked the vally of lost demons unable to find his mother. Hejo walked past the battle field and into the woods that lead to the land of wrath where the devils lived to cause uncontrolable pain to its foes. Hejo walked and felt the sky turn dark as the blood moon came up form the sea of black. so the little devil slept by a tree unable to be seen form above. he dreamed of going to the human world were there was no fighting.
but the dream was stopped but the force of someone grabbing him and pulling him into the air. Hejo opened his eyes and saw himself in a cage the door locked with seven locks. and devils all around him as they took him to the top of a boiling pot. but when all hope seemed lost a sword cut the cage in two with blue flames. Hejo was free for only a little it as another demon grabbed him and ran into the woods.
Hejo asked the demon why he saved him.
and the devil answered because i see in your eyes the powers of a reaper not a demon or a devil. it was ture Hejo was not like any other devil or demon.
his skin was not hard but smooth. he had short claws. and fangs. his hair was white and blue but his skin was green. and his left eye was another color than the other one.
- by nightmarecreeper |
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- | Submitted on 04/18/2009 |
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- Title: the alone devil part 1
- Artist: nightmarecreeper
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Description:
this is part 1 of 15 parts which i will send in one by one every week to be voted. they are about a devil who is different and picked on by all the others. but his dream of going to the human world well make his inner power grow.
- Date: 04/18/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- nightmarecreeper - 04/26/2009
- hey pl there is the 2nd art of story now out XD
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- Etes-vous_pret - 04/22/2009
- tenses need changing, its interesting, I'd read more biggrin
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- Moriko of the Grass - 04/19/2009
- This is really good. But, you keep changing from past tense to present tense. The grammar could use some work, too. But it's pretty good, overall. x3
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