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Little Mila was surprised when the authorities came and took her away from her mother. They said that she was drunk and doing bad things so they took her. "I don't understand" she said. "I wanna stay with mommy". Of coarse they didn't listen, they just loaded her up in their van. Her mother stood in the doorway and watched the two men take her daughter from her. "I wanna stay with mommy!!!" she screamed. She started kicking and slapping. When the men finally got her under control, they took her to an orphanage. They walked inside and right there she saw and old lady. The lady looked nice but, looks can fool people. "another one?" the lady asked in hateful voice. "what's your name kid?" she hissed. "Mila Lewis" the little girl replied in a sweet but scared for her life tone. "put it over there" the woman ordered referring to the little girl.
~this is my first one. Please comment on it so I can continue it. Thanks!~
- Title: The unwanted
- Artist: Jami_713
- Description: This is a story about a little girl who gets taken away from her mom when she is nine and she gets passed around from foster home to foster home.
- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: unwanted girl drunk
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Comments (4 Comments)
- IzayasFun - 08/25/2010
- very nice i'd like to see it continued
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- Creamcake12 - 05/23/2009
- Awesome! Continue the story please. biggrin
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- summerxoxogrl88 - 05/22/2009
- that's really good, you should continue it!
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- Zevraii Targarus - 04/25/2009
- Nice you should turn it into a book really well done!
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