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Quote:psy·cho·path (sk-pth)n.
A person with an antisocial personality disorder, manifested in aggressive, perverted, criminal, or amoral behavior without empathy or remorse.
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The Mag Aoidh's were a kind family; there history was long and adventurous, there were no alchoholics, Suicides, drug addicts, or anything like that- let alone disorders... They origionated in Dublin Ireland as poor farmers, in 1939 Miss Darcy Mac Lochlainn was shipped off to America on the ó Mordha, she was eight months pregnat with her first child, the father a low life drunk left the first month of her pregnacy(It turned out he took a bullet to the head two years later.)
After arriving to America Darcy worked as a maid for a man named Áine Mag Aoidh- he seemed mild-mannered, kind, and quiet. He always had his head in a book and never spoke out of term. A month after on a quiet summer evening her first son was born into the world. A fair haired boy with large deep oak eyes, a curved nose, and large cheeks that enloped on his neck (which was hard to notice.) It took Darcy an hour to come up with the most perfect name. A name that had been passed down generation to generation... Patrick, his middle name doe for his gentle figure.
After four years working, and living amongst Áine who was ultimately a father figure to our young patrick, he felt utterly responsible for the caretaking of Miss Darcy and her young b*****d and after months of descussion Darcy agreed to Wed Mag Aoidh. It was a suttle, sweet wedding;
(Will continue. please comment on what you think so far!!)
- by T i c T o c x |
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- | Submitted on 03/30/2009 |
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- Title: Psychopath (Chapter1)
- Artist: T i c T o c x
- Description: Imagine - not having a conscience, no feelings of guilt or remorse no matter what you do. And that- leads us to Patrick Mag Aoidh ; a seventeen year old Junior living in the shadow of his classmates...the shadow of himself. He is in a sense a gentle, well-mannered, gentleman but overtime he seems to "shift gears", he suddenly turns into a narcarsistic, Stubborn, violent, maniac.
- Date: 03/30/2009
- Tags: freak chapter
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- superstar718 - 04/04/2009
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boring if you had a little more feeling into it will be much better
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