- This dream, is not a lie. Its fact and not an opinion. Have you ever wondered how it was to have your heart torn out of your chest? Have you ever wondered how badly it hurts to see your loved one fall? To see her cry, To feel her pain? You haven't loved till you feel sorry you make her worry, Or for how you make her cry when you don't mean to even if it's out of pure joy. Have you ever wanted to cut your heart out for her? Live for everything and nothing at the same time? Want to see her every waking day? But yet you can't? The distance is great, But yet so short at the same time. You don't seal yourself, but you close up on her? Have you wanted to play a game, but was too afraid to admit things that you really know or want to say? A simple game...One that can make you realize the truth in things. But, there are things that you want to say, admit it, but then what happens? You feel funny, you feel embarrassed, you feel confused? But what really happens? You tell someone, and one things falls apart, but you gain something else. You gain a new view, do you know what it is? An opportunity so great, it makes you feel weak, dizzy, sick, and insane. Yet she keeps you calm, sane and safe? How is that possible? Is it even real? It has to be if you feel like you lost control. What will happen next? Will you get over this sickness and go to her, or just stay where you are thinking you can die from a nightmare? No, you will get over it, go to her and try things out. Never run again, It's not possible with her. Making you feel everything yet nothing, but at the same time you feel like you will have everything, see all and feel once again as if you were in love for the first time. You can't let her go no matter how much you try, not now, not ever, not in a million years. Feeling your heart race, it beat and pound like it hasn't before! "Amazing!" Is your only thought soon to have more, and more in depth. Then one word falls into your mind, Love...love...love...
- by Mark Of The Wild |
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- | Submitted on 03/13/2009 |
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- Title: Can it be?
- Artist: Mark Of The Wild
- Description: N/A (for now)
- Date: 03/13/2009
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- Love Renewed - 03/23/2009
- Dorian he was only writing to express his thoughts. It's not meant to be the world's best poetry. Thank you hun, this was very sweet.
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- Dorian Raker - 03/18/2009
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This is in dire need of a rewrite. Be sure to pay attention to your sentence composition and grammatical structure. Verb-noun agreement skews every so often.
Watch that.
But don't get discouraged. Keep writing. - Report As Spam
- b00_2 - 03/13/2009
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I got bored from reading it. No offense, it was well written though.
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- Psychotic_Ares93 - 03/13/2009
- Awasome Ty, Long time since you wrote something...well, I think at least lol.
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