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Kindness is Forbidden Ch. 1: Never Again
"Ugh. Not another day of being shunned, casting defense spells and being invisible. Not my
ideal day..."
I push off my blanket and grab my brush and yank it through my shoulder-length, crimson hair. I walk to my closet and grab a top, bottoms, and shoes out. Going out my bedroom door, I grab my towel off the doorknob to the bathroom. I turn on the water, adjust it, and strip and get in.
"Ahhh. Nice warm water." I say aloud. It was only me, Yukiao Torunse in my house. I get a couple of squirts of shampoo and lather in my hair. I rinse out my hair, turn off the water, and get out. After I brush my teeth I walk outside, dressed and ready.
POOF!
"Hello Yukiao-chan!" says Hinatai, my fox. Her silver fur seems to shine like a star in the sun, almost temporarily blinding me. The flap-flap of a dragons' wings beating came closer.
"Hinatai, why didn't you tell me Kairi-kun was coming?"
"I thought you knew!"
Hinatai walks back in the house, eager to take a bath and get cleaned off. She hates getting dirty, and takes a bath everyday. Soon I heard the woosh of water running, and then it shutting off.
"Hello Yukiao-kun!"
"Heya Kairi-kun!" I greet my girlfriend as she jumps off Starlight, her dragon. Moonflight see her best friend and roars happily.
"Augh! Government dragons!"
Hinatai comes flying through the front door and skids to a stop.
"Oh. It was just Moony. Hello Kairi-kun!"
end of chapter
- by Simply A Detective |
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- | Submitted on 01/11/2009 |
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- Title: Kindness is Forbidden ch. 1
- Artist: Simply A Detective
- Description: A story about a vampire, a fox, and a stupid government. Please tell me if I should continue.
- Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: kindness forbidden
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Comments (6 Comments)
- NecrotoxicPuppy - 01/18/2009
- woo! you better keep going! I'm a fan of yours now!
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- Simply A Detective - 01/15/2009
- Alright, here's the rest!
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- evilvampiressniki - 01/15/2009
- hey alice i think that you really should continue the start was really good
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- catfinatic - 01/12/2009
- continue please!
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- Sasolyer - 01/11/2009
- continue! ^_^
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- Simply A Detective - 01/11/2009
- Yay Reno!
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