Dreamy Days(Chapter 1)

• Artist: ZaleraAngel
• Description: Amethyst is just like any other girl out in the teenage girl.
  Her life gets turned upside down when a boy from the country side moves to her high school.
  Days after another boy from the city moves to school.
  She has strong feelings for both of them, but which one will she choose?
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: dreamy days love school hate

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OH.MY.GOD.
ITS 8:13am!!!(School starts at 8:30am)
I am so dead! Mrs Solomon is giving me a detention, 100% certain. I still haven't finished that science research!! Wow, what a great way to start the day...
I quickly brush my messy hair, sprinted into the bathroom and washed my face and all that, ran down the stairs and managed to trip on the last step.
I flew across the room and just grabbed a piece bread. I don't really like rushing a lot.

After the horrendous struggle to school i finally managed to get into class. As i walked into the room i saw an unfamiliar guy standing next to the whiteboard.
Mrs Solomon shout into my face saying "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN AMETHYST?!" scream
Oh i was quite shocked. burning_eyes And of course detention for today... stare
"Today class, we have a new boy put into our class! I want all of you to be considerate and kind to the new student" I just don't get how she can change her mood into a kind housewife. The new guy sat next to me, my face suddenly blushed as red a tomato! redface His eyes are AMAZING! One of his eyes is green and the other is blue... ahhhh looking into his eye can make me faint. wahmbulance
Well i actually did believe it or not. I fell asleep onto the desk. I woke up 10 seconds after i fell asleep from the guy whispering to make me wake up. I CANNOT believe he actually paid attention to me! whee

Chapter 2 sad Coming Soon)

Comments

[Zweit]

I'm trying to decide if you ment for this to be a serious bit of writing or not. If so the use of emoticons is ridiculous. A spell checker and appropriate use of commas would be nice.

I wish you luck on the cliched topic of 'typical teen girl', but I think it best to add a little more then the usual romance. Readers get bored and bored fast when they have to read a slightly different version of another story they read.

[Porcelain Cupcakes]

i love it!!! and i am going to try to keep up with it. that means keep the story going until it is finished. a LOT of ppl don't do that, and it makes me sick. you have a LOT of grammer( that is probably spelled wrong) mistakes, so you should work on that. nevertheless, your stories creativity is so good, it kinda makes up for it. i am anticipating on your next chapter, so make it asap, plz!!!

[ZaleraAngel]

oops in the description it was actually meant to be teenage WORLD...