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It finally came to a kiss. All the days of staring at you meant nothing. Your face meant nothing. Everything disappeared. It was just your lips and mine. I lost sight of everything. The feeling was from your lips. It was all that i felt. A warmth inside my heart. I had to breathe. But I didn't care. I didn't care if I died in that instant from holding my breath. I wanted this to last forever. I never wanted this moment to end.
- by Tsunami From Hell |
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- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: A Kiss
- Artist: Tsunami From Hell
- Description: a little part for a story i just made up:D what do you think? comment and tells me:D
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: kiss love yummy
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lara ze - 06/05/2009
- that is so cool
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- nickycat123 - 12/31/2008
- so cuuuuuuuute!!!^_^ 5/5
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- Jesse McCartney Cute - 12/29/2008
- nice like it
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- Hidden Shadow Love - 12/29/2008
- That's very passionate writing. I love it. The way your describing the whole thing, it's like you can feel it all happening.
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- Fayne Darkness - 12/29/2008
- It's okay...But can't you say what exactly are you planning to do with that story... Is this a prologue? Is it chapter one? What is it?
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