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An Angel with a Lost Soul
"bye dust" she called after me.
she always called me dust ever
since i covered myself with some
weird sparkly dust i found when
i was 5. i loved the name dust
anyway. My parents said if dust
was a name and not something
irritating they would definitly
have called me dust. Tonight i
had a strange feeling, like something
was wrong in the air.
I looked around. Nothing but the club
in the distance with flickering lights.
I carry on walking along the dirty
pavement and see many gangs all
looking as scary as the dark night.
i hate everything dark and evil, my
sister said i was the opposite of a
goth. Suddenly i bump into something.
Or someone.
"hey you dog where the f**k do
you think your going" said a voice.
"h-h-h-home. sorry i didnt see you
there, really" i say shaking. "then you
didnt see this..." i feel a throbbing pain
in my face. whats happening? i must get
out of here. the pain is all over my body
now. my chest, my legs, my neck. i run.
i dont know where but i run. i trip up then
eventually i open my eyes. i see a boy, a
young boy. he is bleeding. i put my hand
out to help him but he pulls back. "dont
be afraid..." i tell him, trying to calm him
but how can i calm him when im not calm
myself. the boy runs away, as if he`s seen
a ghost. now i know why. i feel a sharp pain
in my back, like a needle being stuck in your eye.
i try to feel whats there.
it feels like a sharp blade.
A dagger...
- Title: an angel with a lost soul
- Artist: Jeleb
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Description:
this is based on my avatar areana entry
to find out more of what happened before after and inbetwen vote
written in both tenses past and present
written in the first person - Date: 12/28/2008
- Tags: angel with lost soul
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Jeleb - 02/14/2009
- right ive got 3 pages full and i would like to reach a goot rating before i enter it
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- Jeleb - 12/29/2008
- im writing more but i cant seem to find what ive done
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- The_First_Guardian - 12/28/2008
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continue it jus like it was going its great
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- fl0rence co - 12/28/2008
- awww i wanna find out what happens !!!! >:3
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- Jeleb - 12/28/2008
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i am writting the rest of this story for when ive won or lost
comment or pm me to tell me what you would like to see in it - Report As Spam