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"Raylen, ummmmmmmmmmm, yuo are needed downstairs" Gosh, why can't Sharlene get it right? I carefully walked down the attic stairs from my room. i stopped in front of my stepsister Sharlene. "My name is Rayne, so get it straight" I hissed. I glared at her. She shrugged it off. "rayne," She emphatized my name, rolling her eyes. "the police need to speak to you." I'm pretty sure my eyes widened. "T-the p-p-p-police?" She roled her eyes again. Her voice was thick with sarcasm. "Yup. They wanted to invite you to their doughnut party." I scowled. She was making fun of my weight again. I was 14 and already 145 ibs. I ignored it. 'What do they want?" She rolled her eyes yet again. "Melissa said you planted a bomb in her store." I hesitated. "Why?" She sighed. 'Tired of rolling your eyes?" I broke in. She glared at me. "Okay sorry" She sighed again. Said "Just go outside" I marched out the front door, nearly bumping into deputy Nin. 'Raylen..." I blinked. "I go by Rayn now" He grunted and tried again. "Raylen, Melissa Haycraft says she saw you plant a bomb in her conveiniant store, Highway 8." Usually, at this point I would be all but deputy you know I would never plant a bomb anywhere!. ButI knew this wasn't deputy Singer. And I knew that Deputy Nin wouldn't take my crap, So I got right to the point. "I did not plant a bomb in Haycrafts store. I would never go inside that store, much less be seen around it, because Melissa is a witch." he looked surprised. Then he squinted at me. "Melissa is my daughter, did you know that?" I nodded. "I know that, you know that. Timbuktu knows that!" He rolled his eyes. "Raylen, you have been charged with trying to disrupt a store and the murder of ten people." I looked up. "M-murder?" He nodded. "Melissa told me about your Snake Gang and their shootout." I looked dumbfounded, I'm pretty sure. "I w-would NEVER be in the same g-gang as M-melissa!" His eyes widened. "Mels in a.....nevermind." He shook his head. "Just report to the station 7:30 on Saturday" I nodded, looked at my watch and said "I'm going to be late for school"
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- Title: Rayning Fire-chapter 1
- Artist: Unfound Dreams
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Rayn Lontzo must flee from her almost perfect life in Manhatton to go to smalltown Penten, Arizona to escape her past of being accused of crimes. but moving may have brought more for Rayn then she had bargained for.......
CHAPTER ONE:THE POLICE - Date: 12/23/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Unfound Dreams - 12/24/2008
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I guess your right. I still have to work on making my peices more realistic. Thatnks for commenting
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- bluebird943 - 12/24/2008
- I like it, but I don't think it's very realistic. I mean, if the police are charging someone with planting a bomb in a store and killing people, they aren't going to let them run off to school. No offense.
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