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That long ago summer day. I remember it so clearly. I remember the warm air, and the cool breeze passing by. I was walking to my Mom's and he saw me. I pretended not to notice. I kept walking. He was playing with his friends. He saw me and ran down the hill. His eyes were so lit up. "Hey" "Hi" My heart was racing. We walked to my mom's and back. He met up with his friends again. Fat a** Dayshia, "Why you hangin' out with her?" Dylan kind of sighed. "Man, shut - up" He ran to the park with them and watched me try to go to My Dad's. He ran away from them coming back up to me. He laughed a cute little smile. He came up to me and said, "She thinks shes the sexiest girl in the whole town." "Wow," I said "Well you don't agree?" Being sarcastic of course. "Hell no!" he laughed after that. "Then who do you think is?" Hoping it would be me. "I don't know." I was surprised and antsy. My stomach hurting from the Love rushing through me. He started to walk me to my Dad's house. His twin, Dale, was telling me that Dylan wanted to go out with me "Dylan wants to go out with you" He just smiled. I walked away and said, "Meet me at the park at 10:00, and I'll tell you" I smiled and walked away. I went into my house. I feet so happy. I tried to go to sleep. I couldn't though. My mind was rushing my heart racing. I was in Love. I would sleep for a few hours and then wake up and think about him.
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The next day I woke up. I had to be perfect! I put on my make up and perfume and perfect shirt (Haha it was kinda low-cut too) I looked outside. It was drizzling. I looked across the street at the park. I didn't see anything. It was 10:10. I went to look outside. I didn't see anything. I waited an Hour. I went outside and saw something under the slide. I noticed it was him! "Aww" I felt so bad. he waited for an hour for me. I left and walked toward him. He noticed me and smiled. We walked to my mom's and talked. "Hey", he said "You never told me if we'd go out." He said it so shy and cute! "Yea" I looked at him and smiled. We talked for awhile. I then called my other friend Ciara to come over. We hung out. He'd steal my phone and I'd have to lean over to get it. Normal things guy wants. I really didn't care. I just got what I wanted. We'd go to the park every day. I loved it. Until one day I got grounded. He sneak over to see me. We'd talk on the phone. Finally one day at school his brother Joey, saw me in the hallway and said "Dylan said it's over." I was heartbroken. But I had a feeling it was a lie. I didn't take a chance. I broke up with him. And then Joey said it. "I was just kidding anyway" I felt so horrible.
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Months later I still drema about him. I love him to much to let him go ever. Whatever it takes I will get him back. Whatever
- by giggley_bubbles |
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: I love him too much
- Artist: giggley_bubbles
- Description: This is about .. well um .. me! Lol Something I had to do in English. But before I turned it in here I switched it around to be like me and the guy I like Dylan.
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: love much
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The T O X I C papercut - 04/06/2009
- WHY THE HEK YOU BRAKE UP WIT HIM!!!!GUYS LIE Y"KNOWWWWWW
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- That Grim Gentleman - 03/29/2009
- awwwww. sad but cute! i loooooooooove it!!! <3
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 01/06/2009
- very very very sad......luv it thu....5/5
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- Julia Dream - 12/10/2008
- When you write dialogue, each new speaker starts a new line.
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- Chaotic Nyxi - 12/10/2008
- It was well writen and very interesting!
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