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i thought you loved me
thought you had time
i thought you loved me
thought you were mine
but something was wrong
your heart was missing
our time was not long
and now I'm reminiscing
you lost me
you left me
to desert is not the way
i know you lied
i know i tried
but you were gone
too far away
with another girl
away in her world
never told me till it was too late
didn't think of what it would cost me
no that is just your way
i pity her heart
who you've captured now
'cause she's in for a big suprise
you're a bad piece of art
hangin' up on the wall
just waiting to capture
another poor girls eyes
- by chloegantzel |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: you lost me
- Artist: chloegantzel
- Description: a little piece of work i created when the love of my life was lost.
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: lost
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Fayne Darkness - 05/09/2009
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Here's a trick I learned two weeks ago for when you loose a loved one:
Never get too close, avoid the tears.
Because sometimes it's better to be friends,
Then nothing at all. - Report As Spam
- chloegantzel - 12/22/2008
- i totally get you. this sluty flirt...
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- xlavenderxmoonx - 12/17/2008
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I'm in a similar situation now. But it wasn't another girl.
It was Birth Control, and friend interference. Stupid reason? Hell yes....*cry* - Report As Spam
- chloegantzel - 12/12/2008
- i intended it to be that way, because i could not find a poetry section, and this was the closest i could get.
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- ArnauxAnderson - 12/09/2008
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This sounds more of a poem than a fiction story.
It has that feel to it... - Report As Spam