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In the year of 2004 a scientist at west village highschool is working on an experiment that can turn mortals into immortals so that he or no one else can die. Two days before he thaught of this a tragedy struck his family his beloved wife had died in a serios car accident and that is how he came to the conclusion of maken this potion. The following afternoon he is working in his basement where he keeps his plants as he is making he knocks over the chemicals into one of the plants and than the plant shot out a poisoness thorn into the proffessors neck. Intercom speakers comes on in the room of the proffesors you wil be having a substitute teacher today, Mike one of the students there says what a shame than he goes over and talks to the armonie a girl he has had a crush on from the beginning of the school year so he gets up and goes over to talk to her and than thomas one of the kids in the class who thinks he runs everything gets in front of mike and starts talken trash to mike. Mike says why are you always starten some nonsence there is no point of this hmph you hear this punk thomas (pushes) mike in his chest and say's what are you goen to do (pushes) leave him alone says armonie thomas says shut up you pest and than turns back at mike and than a punch came right at thomas and he tumbles to one of the desk's and than the substitute teacher comes into the class room and says cut the nonsence out , you two gentlemen go to the principles office. As they enter the principles office mikee looks down the hall and sees the proffesor and than he exits the building mike goes into the principles office and the principle tells mike and thomas to please be seated , the principle ask's them a series of questions and they respond to each and everyone so he sends them to class but they have after school detention. Later after the first and the second classes were over the class headed out side to have there gym period and than to lunch as they were outside doing there activities mike goes over to talk to armonie once again with no interruption he tells her thanks for helpen him out in first class period she said its ok but thank you for not letten him keep talken about me like that so thank u mike it was no problem mike says. I couldve swaren that I saw the proffesor when I was goen to the principles office but the thing about it was that he looked different like sick you know, I gues but are you psotive that you saw him yes I am sure posotive. The next day the proffesor is in to teach the class but he isnt his self he is covered in green spots and is coughing alot and now it seems like he is losing his mind talken about stuff like plants taking over thmind of humans , the following night the janitor is there to lock up and clean up the mess of what is left over so out of no where the proffesor pops up behind the janitor and kills him by strangling him with a vine and than he puts him in this cacun pod and drags him away.
To Be Continued.......
- by the akatsuki pein |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: The Vine
- Artist: the akatsuki pein
- Description: This story is about a scientist who is worken on a immortality chemical but he knocks the chemicals over into his plant and the rest you will know just read
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: vine
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Comments (4 Comments)
- KCO_rocks - 01/11/2009
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poor grammar. I was very confused through it. there are no " to show that they people were talking and I just couldnt follow it. Interesting story line but you need to improve it so people can read it easier.
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- Stephanie the reader - 12/10/2008
- How many periods are there? 2? 4? I got lost partway through the sentence. BUt, before I got lost, it seemed pretty good! smile
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- deathwish432 - 12/05/2008
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it was interesting =]
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- the akatsuki pein - 12/05/2008
- please give me at least a 3 i was bored and came up with this
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