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He was running in the pouring rain,he slipped a few times but that didn't stop him.He was going straight to her house,he wanted her to take him back.It had been a week since they broke up,yet he never stopped thinking of her.
He finally reached her house.The door was wide open,so he walked in.He went up the stairs and towards her room.Then he seen her and his enemy,Bryan.She was sitting on her bed while Bryan was hugging her.
He started walking down the stairs,his heart broken.She was facing the other way on her bed,so he didnt see the tears and displeasurement on her face.Bryan wasn't hugging her,he was about to slice her throat with a kunai.
She then screamed loudly,he ran up the stairs and yelled her name,"Akira!!" Bryan looked at him and came straight towards him,the kunai in his hand."Riku.watchout!!" she yelled.Riku dodged the attack and pushed Bryan against a drawer,wich made a lamp crash on his head.Knowing he was knocked out Riku grabbed Akira's hand and ran out of the house.He was taking her to his house.
Running in the rain he fell again,but this time it hurt even more.Akira held out her hand and helped him up.She gave him a hug and said "Thank you,Riku." "Akira,will u please take me back?" he asked in a sad voice."Of course." she said as she gave him a kiss.
He smiled and held her hand as they finished walking to his house.
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"Mom,im home." he said as he entered.His Mom then enters the room and says "Oh they're you are,I was beginning to get worried.Hello Akira." Akira says with a smile"Hello." "Mom I was wondering if Akira could maybe um sleep over?"he asked. "What?Where do you expect her to sleep?" she said with a confused look on her face. "In the guest bedroom." he replied. "Hmm,I don't know." she said. "Please." he asked. "Alright,but I will lock your door and window,okay?" she said. "Okay."said Riku.
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Riku and Akira spent the day at the amuesment park.He then walked her home. "When will your parents come back?" he asked. "Hmm.I think in the morning." Akira replied.They reached her house and went into her room.Akira lied down on her bed,tired.Riku sat next to her and they watched TV.Akira fell asleep and so did Riku,an hour later he awoke.HE got up,covered Akira in a blanket,kissed her on the forehead and,wispered in her ear "I promise I will always love you." He turned off her TV,closed all her windows and left her house.
THE END.
- by Chomp Chomp Dead |
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- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: I Promise I'll Always Love You
- Artist: Chomp Chomp Dead
- Description: hmm idk i was bored,i guess u can call it a love story,anyways plz read and comment.
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: promise always love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xiate - 02/16/2009
- not bad. There are a lot of grammer mistakes, but that's ok. That's why we have people who love to edit our stories. ^^
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- Raziel is mine - 12/26/2008
- Terrible grammar and a predictable, cliche storyline. If you want to improve your grammar, message me; I'd be happy to help. If you don't, that's fine. I really couldn't care less.
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- xXart_freakXx - 12/17/2008
- since u read one of mine i decided to read yours it was good but it could use some work mind if i edit it?
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