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a duck swims in a pond
it's wondering, pondering
over life and how it works
as it swims in circles
it thinks about life
how it would be easier
to be a human
to have the smarts of poeple
as the duck swims
pondering life
a human sits on the edge
planning to end life
the human hate life
how it wishes it were a duck
and fly away
into the sunset of a different life
as the human points the knife at it's chest
the duck flys toward the human, hoping to stop it
as the first drop falls, it starts raining
for there is always someone that cares.
- by superchick37 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: the duck? maybe?
- Artist: superchick37
- Description: umm, i have no idea what this peom is about. i was really bored and just started writing about nothing in paticular. i say its in fiction, but the format is more poem/lyric like, but it didn't fit in... any ways plz tell me how bad/good it is by comenting, and plz look up my other writings (The Boy and Your Child) plzs and tahnk yous :)
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: duck maybe
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ll sedona sunrise ll - 11/27/2008
- ...odd, but ok!
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- superchick37 - 11/26/2008
- very bored
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- puramiddo - 11/26/2008
- It was good, but it is obvious that you were bored.
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