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The sun was for the first time in about a month, helping , me. It was coming up so quickly. Then men had started freaking out ten minutes ago. The sun was just coming over the tall buildings when they tried to get me to move. One tried to pick me up but I was bolted to the ground. I felt my skin start to tingle warning me about the sun, but I I she smiled. Then at the last second the men dropped the ropes and started running, but the sun flooded the street. I felt wind pull me up off the ground. Then I saw the wight robe around my arms and over my head. The tingling stopped and my eyes closed as I heard screaming. At first I thought it was from the men, but there was a girls scream as well. I noticed that I was screaming my head off but I felt calm and silent. I saw the boy's face in my mind so a forced my eyes open to see then men were gone. I looked down into a puddle of water to see that it wasn't just my robe that had appeared. I had shoulder length hair that was wight with black ends on it. I could also see that my age had changed by about two or three years. I felt different too. I felt like a woman when I started to float back down to the ground. I knew he would be proud. I had mastered my ability so much I could walk around at day. I felt happy but then a feeling started to take over my body. I could hear the boy (not really a boy now because he has returned to his real age) crying. I could feel his tears falling on me. I could see his red eyes. Then I felt my self get dizzy. I felt to the ground and covered my head. My head started to pound hard. Then it stopped but then i heard my wrist pounding. I closed my eyes, but then I could see all my blood inside of me pounding. Then I felt some one touch my back. I looked to see, no one. Then I fell down on the ground, my pain went away . Then I felt the sun pounding on my back and I closed my eyes knowing that my pain had made my robe and my new power fade away. Tingling went all over my body as I started to burn away.
I thought it would be the end but I felt some one pick me up. I was to weak to fight so I just lied in their arms. I opened my eyes just a sliver seeing that the boy was holding me. my eyes snapped open and my mind awoke. I wanted to ask so many questions, but he said calmly "you're okay now." Then I felt my eye lids fall as I started to get weak again and I said " what world are we in?" He stopped walking and said "I am in earth, but you are dead." I wanted to open my eyes and tell him I wasn't dead but then my body was back on the ground. I opened to see i was at the house and the boy wasn't there. I would of gotten up and started to look for him but then before I could stop it I fell asleep. The question repeated in my head, Was I dead?
- by I_cry_for_your_heart |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: me+light=death
- Artist: I_cry_for_your_heart
- Description: read ch 1-6
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: melightdeath
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Clapper Cheeks - 01/25/2009
- Pretty good. Not perfect, because there is some spelling mistakes. Like Wight (white).
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- Jot18 - 11/24/2008
- Nice story but i only read this passage. I am sorry but i really dont like to read.Many people will enjoy ur work so Keep it up.
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