- In a time of war,there were two lovers.But when a raging war started they were kept appart.The could only look at each other from the two moutains dividing their villages.The girl,Yujiama,wept when she went to the mountain and her loner did not come.The next day,the boy,Mishihuga,stood at the tip of his moutain and sighed to see that his lover did not come.The two thought that they were forced to leave the moutains.They then thought if they tried one more time they might be able to see each other.When they did they talked and brain-stormed to find a way the go and get closer to each other.But how would they do it?They then figued out that they could meet by digging tunnels under-ground.And so the dug for many days.Somtimes they would forget why they were digging at all.But then remember.They digged dead ends to confuse theives or others who would forbid their love.They finally met up and for the first time in a long time they kissed.Then,after they kissed,crystal like rocks lit up with a aqua color.Now they know how to find each other.But when the two felt like they were on top of the world,a soilder for Yujiama's village caught his eyes on the cave.He went inside and slowly traveled throught it.This could be very bad.
- by AngelOfDarkness98 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/22/2008 |
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- Title: Forbidden Love (Part 1)
- Artist: AngelOfDarkness98
- Description: A very sad but them heart moving at the end kind of story.
- Date: 11/22/2008
- Tags: forbidden love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Nana Shinu Ai - 11/30/2008
- terrrific poem luv it
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- AngelOfDarkness98 - 11/28/2008
- oh ya its kinda like that but the soilder part is different
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- w-a-l-k-i-n-g distraction - 11/27/2008
- uhm isn't that just a copy of "the cave of two lovers" from Avatar The Last Airbender? n_n;; aha but the overall idea of the story i like! 4/5
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