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Every one told her not to.
Every one said it would end badly.
She would not listen, her curiosity was to great, as the Rabbit lured her away from her sister sitting by the willow.
She knew what could happen, she had heard tales from the villagers, but she could not break the the gaze she had made on the White Rabbit. She followed him into the misty fields, thick with grass un-cut, he dissapeard into darkness.
As the young girl was starting to regain her senses
she slipped...
Down the hole she fell. On and on and on she continued to fall down the darkness consumed hole. No hope for land she thought, no hope for survival.
Down she went untill a white light appeard, a strange cat with a maniacle grin put out his paw for her
she took it...
The Queen faced her, stared at the young girl who was trembling before her Majesty, dressed in fine linis of bloody red, and never ending black.
"I have what you want, I can give it to you, that is, for a price." She held a regal yet evil gaze upon the poor girl.
The girl (while she went white with fright as the queen spoke her price) accepted the offer.
She was taken back to her home un harmed, but quite changed. Extremly changed. The villagers knew what must have happend. Every one, evn her friends and her family were frightend of her.
The queen sat at her throne made of the hearts of playing cards. She was smiling, she was giggling at her new treasure to put with the rest of her extrordinary collection. Twas a box. A small wooden box that at first look you wold think was not special at all. Untill of course you looked carefully, ever so carefully, for on it, engravied and inked in small golden letters, wrote:
'Alice's Sanity'
- by Evey Woodburn |
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- | Submitted on 10/25/2008 |
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- Title: A new Alice in Wonderland
- Artist: Evey Woodburn
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Description:
This is the promotion story for my avatar in the avatar arena. I was inspired by American McGee's Alice. I hope you enjoy it and please feel free to rate and comment on if you thought it was very good or horrible.
Seriously I would love to hear what you think. The rest of the story will be available to the public soon so keep checking in to my journal. XD Chapters will pop up along a certain length of time. (usually a chapter a week)
The image is not mine but i aprove of whome ever did it. - Date: 10/25/2008
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Comments (1 Comments)
- oh-look-a-penny - 08/07/2009
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Wow. Blew me away. Loved it. I am soooo adding it to my favorites. <3
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