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Shanie stomped Into school turning up her ipod ignoring her mom’s yells. Her and her mom had just got into the worst fight of the month. The second she walked into the school she was bombarded by her two best friends and Mr.Gluam the principal, she could tell now that he was not happy with her. “Shanie, I told you that if you did not change you hair color and the style you would be suspended.” Her hair was black with pink, orange, purple, and blue highlights and it stuck out more then a infuriated porky pine. Kandace and Zoey where hiding behind Shanie like they where the ones in trouble. But Shanie just frowned and replied angrily “I told you yesterday Mr.Gluam, I can’t change my hair color right now because we do not have the money.” She was lying. She had four thousand dollars laying at home under her bed for her and Armelle’s run away escape to Germany. He Grunted and walked off. Zoey and Kandace both grabbed one of Shanie’s hands and pulled her down the hall way flopping down pulling her with them. “so do you have bill today? What’s the news on tokio hotel” Kandace squealed obnoxiously “Yeah we know you know so no lying!” “okay guys Bill is better now, sortta he is still sick and cant talk but his surgery was yesterday.” “awwh.” They both threw on the fakest sad smiles ever “what about Bill. Do you have him” Zoey asked trying to seem calm Shanie pulled out her yellow ipod with a black case and orange stickers on the back that said bill. “Of course I do, and nein, you can’t borrow him.” Zoey rolled her eyes and looked up. Shanie screamed “ow what was that for you jerk!” She had been kicked in the back. She looked up it was Pete her boyfriend. She stood up and hugged him.
Then she threw her self back onto the ground praying for the bell to ring she wanted away as soon a possible. “hey what’s the time Zoe?” “8:30 why?” Shanie didn’t answer she just gathered her stuff up and began to walk away as the bell was ringing she was half way down the hall when everyone caught up to her she hated the hallways. She pushed and shoved people out of the way till she got to the classroom, she wanted this day to be over with it was her last day in Texas, or American even. Half way threw Mrs. Evans language arts class she had fallen asleep to her rambling. She was startled awake by the bell to get to the next class. ”yes, now to a class I can use German” she whispered to herself clenching her fist tightly. Some girls looked back at her and giggled her smile slowly faded away, she tried not to cry but couldn’t handle her tears where to much for her to control. She shoved through the girls and ran to the restroom, she couldn’t figure out why it hurt so much she was used to the teasing she had been putting up with it since she was thirteen, and she was seventeen now. She whipped away her tears and started down the hall, she passed up her class and keep walking it turned into a run she ran straight out of the school and down to the convenient store that was a little ways up the street. She pulled out her phone and texted Armelle.
Shanie; Leave school now ell.
Armelle; why?
Shanie; Armelle, we are leaving today get your a** out of the school and meet me at my house.
- by Im Betting On Brittany |
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- | Submitted on 10/20/2008 |
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- Title: Komm und rette mich
- Artist: Im Betting On Brittany
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Description:
Im in love with bill kaulitz
this is only te first erm page.
I was inspired to do this by my best friend stephaine
she means the world to me
another thing.
i didnt do this to please you. - Date: 10/20/2008
- Tags: komm rette mich
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Always Fear Amber - 10/20/2008
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try what IcyWolfling said.
you should start new paragraphs and watch the punctuatiosn.
I love Th less than the next screaming girl(ocasional guy oO)fan, but thats not really something to make a story of. Altho. you could make it more your own. Try a diff name and country, but leave it your little secret that it's about bill and Germany.
Ex Eric(Bill)lives in Italy(Germany)get it?
Just a thought, you dont have to go along. I made one b4. when I was 10, about 3 years ago? Yeah. embarassing... - Report As Spam
- IcyWolfling - 10/20/2008
- Might you make the text black and increase the size? The way it is now is very difficult for me to read.
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- The Velvet Desire - 10/20/2008
- Good
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