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running through the trees and try to find my way .I keep running rubbing my eyes. weeping till my eye hurt and turn red. I call,"TRINA!! Come!" through the trees sweeps the snow white bangel tiger taller then a horse and stronger, too. I bury my face in her fur and think, "I know it not a curse but it feels like it."
Trina at me and purrs," come now Morie you are not cursed you are just different. you have the eyes the color of a waterfall and hair so black like a bleack night. so stop complaining and lets go to camp."we start to walk to camp, me relying on Trina to guide me through the forest.
"do you think that I am weird Trina?" I said.
"No. now go to bed",narls Trina, " and no more foolish questions."
we fall into a deep sleep.
- Title: Curse
- Artist: JJankes
- Description: A story of girl trying to find what she is and why she is it.
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: thecurse
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Memorable Moon - 10/05/2008
- to short =(
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- Reboot-Restart - 10/05/2008
- It needs more. Did the curse just activate and destroy a school or did your character get mad fun of and just ran? I'll reserve further judgment until you decide to write more.
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- schizophrenic spongebob - 10/05/2008
- wow... not wow in a good way, a really bad story way.
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- Gaya has a n00b - 10/05/2008
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your punctuation and grammar sucks.
and it's a lame story. - Report As Spam
- Wanted_to_be_Loved - 10/04/2008
- interesting but kinda short
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