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Hikari 2.7
Chapter 1
Long time ago, in the Dark World, there were seven great spirits that once were killed by a stronger, wiser demon, who’s name was Yozuko. The seven great spirits were sealled inside seven ordinary teens.
In 1990, there was a girl named Hikari. At the age of fourteen, Hikari found something really strange. A weird looking tattoo shaped like a rattle snake around a six cornered star placed on her right arm. Hikari was surprized. She said:”What is that!” She looked at it for another 10 seconds. The tattoo began to sparkle. The light began to sparkle in infinity. Then a strange looking creature went out of the tattoo, and Hikari began to look like it. She wasn’t herself anymore. She felt different. Her back grew bat wings, a horn grew in her forehead, she even grew a demon tail! On the black wall in Hikari’s room, a portal to the Dark World appered. A strange creature with a dragon tail and wolf teeth came from the portal and pulled Hikari in the Dark World.
The sky was purple. There were really weird creatures.Hikari asked:”Huh………well..what’s your name?” she said while shaking.The demon said: “My name is Rakino. The wolf demon. Know why I pulled you here?” Rakino said. “Why?…..Why did you drag me here?” she said while shaking. “It’s because you transformed into Karin, the spritit sealed inside you! You don’t know how much it can damage in both worlds?!. I will have to use another paper seal……..” Rakino said. He activated the Dragon paper seal to bring Hikari back to normal.”Dragon!”. Hikari began to turn back to her normal look.
“Let me explain to you. Once upon a time, there were seven great spirits took over the leadership in the Dark World. Until a greater spirit came and killed them. His name is Yozuko. When the Seven Great Sprits died, they were sealed inside seven kids, and you’re one of them! But…..I’m glad you’re here. The seven kids who have the great spirits sealed inside them can also save the dark world from evil. The seven great sprits’ names were:Yosuke, Karin, Jarino, Kabuto, Norino, Tayuyo and Nakutzo.
“Here! I will give you your own little creature to help you in some of the missions. Or maybe give you some advice.” Rakino told Hikari.”Ok.There you go!” as he took another seal.”Meet Nana!” A little green angel came out of the seal.”Hi there! What’s your name?”said Nana.”Uh…..I’m Hikari. You know..I’m sort of shy sometimes. Nice to meet you!”. “Ok. Done with the “Chit Chat”, Hikari and Nana. There you go. Your own cristal, Hikari. That’s where your gonna keep Nana sealed. It’s sort of like a house for all angels that belong to the kids that keep the Seven Great Spirits sealed inside them.”
“Oh…and here is a thing! At your missions, you will see portals wherever you are when you need to complete missions! Some of the 7 kids will probably join you in the missions. And rememeber. Not only you 7 kids have spirits inside you. There are lots of creature with weaker spirits. But don’t worry. You’ll beat the evil guys! Rakino said.
“Eye-eye, captain Rakino!” Hikari replied.
“And remember, you got time until your next mission to rest. So go back to the human world. And don’t forget what I told you!”
“Good bye, Rakino-san!, I won’t forget a thing!”
A new portal appears. As Hikari walks in it, Rakino waves to her….
Don't forget to read the next chapter!(Sorry for the spelling mistakes). biggrin
- by Simply Enchanted |
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- | Submitted on 09/30/2008 |
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- Title: Hikari 2.7 Chapter 1
- Artist: Simply Enchanted
- Description: This is my new story about a girl named Hikari with spirit inside her that fights evil in the Dark World. Hope you like it. Chapter 2 will come out soon! So don't forget to check it out!
- Date: 09/30/2008
- Tags: hikari chapter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 13bubblegum13 - 08/22/2009
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Eh, it's a start. Your vocabulary needs to be broadened though. Details need to be MORE detailed, you know?
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- Sasuke_Sharingan_9999 - 10/01/2008
- Cool!
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- Simply Enchanted - 10/01/2008
- thanks. the 2nd chapter will be coming up soon!
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- Orphan-Eater Slenderman - 09/30/2008
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Sweet!'
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