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Chapter 1:Entering Addorinack
Drakutha,A teenage boy that was Half-Dragon Half-man,Was walking through The Dorniat forest.Along with his best friends,Who are also both Half of an animal.Seirta Gemall,A.k.a Gem.Was half Unicorn.Elrokk,A.k.a El.Was half Hawk,He was not very strong.But he was useful when we needed a bird's eye view.
We were all traveling to Addorinack,where we could find food,Shelter,and Clothing.Right now,Seirta..She only had on a Emerald Green T-shirt on and Blue short-Shorts.Unlike Elrokk,He had on long,brown slacks and a Tee Top that said BIRDS,eyes view on the front.I'm wearing Khaki Shorts,and A white T shirt.
Our World is called Parini.
It is protected by our new system of security,It is called MemoPhrazer.It is the highest formula ran by Atrochin.Atrochin is a gas formed by klinto seed and Chemjii Leaves.
All of this makes the best security system.If you go pass the world and you are not a permanent Sorcerer or Half-Human then you get arrested by the Pathera guards.Pathera is the Jail in Melthander.The guards Punish prisoners with a death match every year.This year's death match starts in october.
As we enter Addorinack,Guards pace through the Walkway in.You must state your name and show your Gem.The gem's tell if your a Male,or female.And if your a sorcerer or a Half-Human.My gem is a Emerald and white mix of color.Seirta's gem is a very dark blue and a deep pink mixed with yellow.Elrokk's gem is pure black with a speck of red in the corner."Drakutha Eldrin.",I say as I pull out my gem from my pocket."Elrokk..Chipsqa",Said Elrokk..Slightly embarassed of his last name."Seirta Gemall",Said Seirta confidently.
"You may enter the city of Addorinack",said One of the guards.
As we entered we encountered a Tetshor.They are Non sorcerer and Full human."What are you doing..",I hissed."I-i dont-Where am i?",Said the Tetshor."You are somewhere you are not meant to be.",Said Elrokk."Help me get..To earth.",The Tetshor weeped."Come here..Follow me.",I said..Chuckling.We all walked back to the guards and handed the Tetshor over."Name and gem please.".The Tetshor slowly pulled out a fake silver gem."Uh..uh..Sora Melrose.",Said Sora.
"That is a fake gem,Miss.Please come with us.",Said The Guard.They whispered a sorcerer spell,Misdondera,And a Little blue box appeared.The guard and Sora walked through into the box.
"Hmm..Teleport Box.",I said."Cheap.."
- by Teh Rave Mobile |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: Drakutha - Chapter 1
- Artist: Teh Rave Mobile
- Description: This is a very high detailed story in which a boy and his friends discover a magical world that was never meant to be seen.
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: drakutha magic
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Comments (4 Comments)
- RavEr MachiNe - 07/31/2010
- Hey, It's Teh Rave Mobile. I couldn't remember my acc. info on my other account. Anyways, I know I have to make improvement and I'm re-writing the whole series. Thanks for your feedback ^^
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- SimpleAForApple - 05/27/2010
- You have a long way to improve kiddo. Fix up your grammar and work on your plot more.
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- [XblackfireX] - 05/01/2010
- Capitalize much?
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- enmortem - 02/04/2009
- oooh Drakutha sounds sexy ;DD
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