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After having a huge fight with my family I stormed out of the house slaming the door behind me. It had to be the stupidest fight between us, yet one of the biggest. I don't even remember the last time we had a fight. When I stormed out of the house I went over to the closest park. I walked around it a couple times until I remeber my favourite spot. I jumped the gate and landed among the ruins of an old burned down building. It was a beatiful sight, the trees' leaves were changing colours, flowers were out and about, and the grass was a bright green.
Walking through the ruins, I cam upon a little black bench.I sat down after hours of walking around. Tears started rolling down my face without me noticing it. I started thinking about the ruins and my family and how well they all fit together. After that fight my family is ruins. Feeling the cold breeze rush by I wrapped my arms around me. Forgetting my jacket on the way out I had to sit in the cold with wet tears running down my face. My family might not ever want to see me again, I thought to myself.
Seeing how much my family meant to me and how bad of shape it was in made it all the more beatiful like my most favourite spot. After sitting for who knows how long I felt someone touch my shoulder and wrap my warm jacket around me. I turned around to see who it was and it was the kindly face of my mother with tears rolling down her face. "You scared us.. running off like that. We had no idea were to look after a couple of hours I remember you telling me about this place. So, I came here looking for you. I found you my dear, and this place is better then you said it was." said my mother. I stood up about to say something but nothing came out. I fell into her arms as she walked me out of there back into the place we like to call our home, our life, our family. They welcomed us with warm cups of hot chocolate and blankets. I was sorry we ever got into a fight.
- by kell-bells |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: A Lost Child
- Artist: kell-bells
- Description: i know its short but oh well, i dont do long because then it isnt good.. not that this is >.<
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: child fight lost
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Llama Goes Moo - 06/29/2009
- You say you were bored when you were writing this, but if you're going to post it, put effort into editing it. If you don't, then there's no point in anyone reading this.
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- kell-bells - 07/18/2008
- ...ehhh like i said i was bored >.< so i dont really care for editing so yeah
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- minimouse12345 - 07/17/2008
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Good, but it could use some editing. Remember, when someone talks, a new paragraph starts. Also, think of the reality of when people talk (does that make sense?). Ask yourself: would someone actually say this, or am I kidding myself? It's a very good piece nonetheless.
Good luck! biggrin - Report As Spam