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The Retribution
A loud scream was heard followed by three gun shots. Seth began to run for the door,but by then it was to late. The door, the stairs, the walls, and the ceiling were stained with his family's blood. He destroyed the door on his way in as a tear fell from his eye. Staring in awe at his whole family on the ground...dead. The tears showered down his face as anger, hate, but mostly revenge overpowered him. He fell to his knees weeping, but just then his mind was made up. A book with unlimmited power was now in his hands. Seth read a secret spell to call the devil to his blood stained home. Moments passed by as a loud bang filled the air as the devil in his own flesh stood before him. "WHY DO YOU CALL ME HERE...MORTAL"
"i ask you a favour, please share you power with me and in return i will offer you my soul."
The time flew by again as the devil agreed. He held out his hands as Seth became the most powerful mortal to ever walk on this earth. Just then seth noticed a symbal was on the floor near the back door. Seth let out a evil laugh as he ran as fast as lightning to reach his new found goal. Fire overpowed him as he now held to flaming blades with the devil's tail. He dashed into the room so fast it was a blink of a eye and began slaughtering everyone in his path. Taking 5 bullets, never gave up. But finaly it was done he was shot directly in the heart and a sword was throw his back. Seth feel to his knees and prayed his last words.
"please God take care of my family and know that i will always love them."
His eyes closed as he faded away. ONly leaving behind one small tear with a lot of hope.
- by burningassassin101- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: The Retribution
- Artist: burningassassin101-
- Description: This is a story i wrote about a 20 year old boy who lost his whole family and his loved one.They were killed my a gang on thugs called "Hells obedience." Now it is his goal to kill every last one of them.
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Ajina Enbi - 07/16/2008
- Wait, but isn't this in the non-fiction section?
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- Ms_December - 07/16/2008
- yay 1st! wow this is kind of a dark story.. but not bad
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