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There was an wolf who was born under the tree of majestic fire and the sky of silent ice. He was born with a sword in paw and shield in the other. His name was Zuzaku. His parents died the day after his birth but before there death they gave him an amulet to tell him what he has to do. He then grew up in the Leaf town of Uzaku. He trained with the greatest wolf warrior of all. His name was Mazuki the wolf of the gods also wielding the holy dark sword of Babylon. They trained well and hard teaching Zuzaku everything Mazuki knew. In the end the Leaf town was attacked by Nightmares a rare form of monster. People turn into Nightmares only when they die and if they took the life away from a good one. Mazuki was killed but last saying these words. You must look unto yourself to find the real you. Please…. find the temple of gods and kill the evil god of darkness…..then was dead. Zuzaku was filled with sadness and anger. He took the sword of Babylon and ran as fats as he could to the temple wipping out anyone and everything in his way with no rest or stops. He just keep running to take revenge. He went to the temple and rested for 10 mins. He said U b*****d U WILL PAY FOR KILLING MY FRIENDS,MY FAMILY,MY LIFE! AGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! then he charged for the god of darkness. He gets inside and everything is pitch black then he said COME OUT U COWERD FIGHT ME LIKE A REAL GOD NOT A WEAK MORTAL LIKE U SAY WE ARE! Then he came out and said MUHAHAHAHA! Then he held up 2 orbs. One holding his parents and the other holding Mazuki. He screamed and attacked him doing an ancient art. That move was this he said HOLY LIGHT OF THE GODS AND DARKNESS OF HELL GIVE ME UR POWER SMAZUKICONA! Then slashes through god of darkness with all his might. He fell to his knees crying for gods mercy to revive his life and his friends and family….. Then a burst of light revived the temple then all gods appeared before him. He looked up and bowed your highnesses he said. They said we shall revive your friends,villiage,and family. Thank you for reviving us Zuzaku here is our gift. They revived everyone and everything. They went back to the leaf town like nothing happened and Mazuki said you keep the sword.
THEN END
- by Keyblader Cloud Strife |
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- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: The Fire Ice Wolf of The Gods
- Artist: Keyblader Cloud Strife
- Description: here plz leave only good comments:3
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: fire wolf gods
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Comments (6 Comments)
- DarklingJunior - 11/28/2008
- Tryin' to make it as nice as I can with some freindly advice
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- Keyblader Cloud Strife - 11/28/2008
- GOOD COMMENTS ONLY PLZ! T-T
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- DarklingJunior - 11/28/2008
- Cloud, make a title that matches the story, make some discriptive words too man, the begginging was pretty good but it seems like you didn't really take your time and just skipped through it instead of putting much thought in to it trying to make it the first and the best, if you do another, make it the best you can dude.
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- Keyblader Cloud Strife - 11/28/2008
- crys i said only good comments and this is my first story ok! crys
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- Avulira - 11/28/2008
- This story was far to rushed, jeez I mean it's not that hard to be discriptive. Put more effort into your writing if you want to be successful. You started the story very poorly 'There was an wolf' OMFG! well duh, you named the story 'The Fire Ice Wolf of The Gods' which is actually a pretty crappy title, i've read too many stories with titles similar to that I don't take them lightly anymore. Either put more effort in and start trying or stop writing.
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- Lady Ceil Phantomhive - 11/27/2008
- Good job Cloud-kun!4/5
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