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"Kelly! You came!" My friend, Emily shouted, running threw a group of dancing people, and gave me a friendly hug.
I laughed, smiling at her kindly. "Yeah, sorry I'm so late." I grinned sheepishly at her, looking around the room at all the people. Well I'd just broke up with my boyfriend, Andrew. So I guess I could flirt with anyone I wanted. But that's if I wanted too.
Emily grabbed my hand, pulling me threw the group of people. "We're playing 'Seven minutes in Heave', in the back room. You're are going to play!" Emily giggled.
I sighed, just like Emily to force me to play a game that invalves you making out with someone. "But Emily-" Before I could finish my sentence, Emily turned around and just glared at me.
"No! You're going to play!! You understand!?" She growled at me.
To scared to answer, I just nodded, my eyes widened a little. As Emily pulled me into a room with a circle of people talking, and a top hat in the center. The top hat was filded to the top with junks of paper. I looked at all the people, and froze as my eyes met Andrew's. He froze too. "Emily!" I whispered, complaning a little.
Emily sighed, giving me a look that was saying "Sorry."
I sighed, sitting down next to Emily in the circle. Emily smiled, standing back up and picking up the hat. "Ok! I'm sure that everyone knows how to play 'Seven minutes in Heaven'. So! Kelly gets to go first!" Emily annouced, turning to me with the hat, grinning from ear to ear.
My jaw dropped, in to much shock to answer. I heard a familiar chuckle, and I glared in Andrew's direction. Quickly, I put my hand in the hat, and pulled out a hat. I openned the foulded paper slowly. Looking at the broken heart that was on the paper.
I blinked and Emily looked over my shoulder. "Who had the broken heart?!" She asked.
"Crap!" I heard someone whisper, I looked around the room, gasping as I saw that it was Andrew!!
I glared at Emily, and she just giggled. Pulling me onto my feet and pushed me into the closet with Andrew following behind. "Alright, seven minutes!" Emly smiled at me, and i just glared back.
Emily shut the door, and I just glared at Andrew. Andrew had an odd look on his face, almost looking like he was sick or like he was going to kill himself. "Kelly-" Andrew began, but I scoffed.
"Don't 'Kelly' me! I loved you! And I thought you loved me! But I was wrong!" I yelled at him, I heard someone gasp outside the closet, I felt a tear run down my cheek as I continued to yell at him. "You went behind my back and cheated on me with some girl that you didn't even know!?!" I screamed. Andrew openned his mouth to speak, but I just shook my head. "I thought you were different...But your just like all the other guys I've dated. Arragent, two timing, low lifes!" I screamed.
I couldn't stand to be in the same room with him any longer. So I swung the door open, and stormed out. Tears ran down the side of my face as I stormed back into the room with dancing people, but the music stopped, and everyone just gazed at me as I left. I slammed the door behind me, and walked out onto the porch swing. The tears continued to fall as I hugged my knees into my chest, and sobbed aloud.
I continued crying, as I heard the door open quietly. I looked to see who was leaving, but it was Andrew. I looked at him, then looked away quickly. I saw him walk towards the swing, taking a seat next to me.
I whiped some of the tears away from my eyes. "What? Did you come to see me cry?" I asked, my voice broke twice.
Andrew flinched and shook his head. "Kelly...I....I....I'm sorry..." I laughed once, looking away from him. "Kelly, just listen. Ok?"
I sighed unwillingly. "Fine." I grumbled.
Andrew sighed. "See....When that one girl kissed me...Oh! Just so you know, she kissed me, not the other way around. See, she was my friends ex-girlfriend. She wanted to get back at him by me. I told her no, but as you walked in...She just...Kissed me." He whispered.
I just shook my head. "How can I believe that?" I whispered, whiping away a tear.
Andrew sighed again, but frustrated this time. "Kelly! I'm! Telling! The! Truth!" He growled, his hand cupped under my chin, forcing me to look at him.
Before I knew it, he kissed me. I sat in shock, the kiss wasn't soft or sweet. It was ruff and spicy. I was still in shock as he forced my mouth openned and I felt his hot breath in my mouth. Before anything else happened, I pulled away. "Andrew..." I whispered, looking at the ground.
"Don't 'Andrew' me, honey. I love you, and you know it! You're always on my mind." He whispered. I couldn't take it anymore, I pressed my lips to his again. I heard Emily's cheer of happyness, and others clapping in the background.
Quickly I pulled away again, looking towards the window. Emily grinning from ear to ear again, and I just smiled back. "Emily must have set us up." I whispered to him.
"I'm glad she did." Andrew murmured, kissing me softly this time. I sighed, kissing him back.
Emily came out, giggling again. "My plan worked!" She shouted.
I just smiled at her, then back to Andrew. "Yeah, I guess it did." I whispered, resting my head on Andrew's shoulder, and his arms wrapped around me, holding me close to him, and kissed my forehead.
- by l rosie-posie l |
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- | Submitted on 01/03/2009 |
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- Title: Seven Minutes In Heaven
- Artist: l rosie-posie l
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Description:
This story is about a girl, her names Kelly, who goes to her best friends party. They end up playing "Seven minutes in Heaven." Kelly ends up picking her ex-boyfriends number, and goes into the closet with him, she then starts to tell, more like yells, at him everything horrible that he did to her.
This is my four story that I've entered in the arenas. I hope you all like it and be sure to comment
P.S. Sorry for the horrible spelling. - Date: 01/03/2009
- Tags: love seven minutes heaven vampire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Faryata - 07/03/2010
- it was really good and it was well wow .....moving
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- bindyblueeyes - 06/19/2009
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this is really good
i think i'll give it a 5/5 even though there may have been some typos - Report As Spam
- SeXiiTeDdyBeArGiRl - 05/26/2009
- i loved it it was just soooooo sweet!
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- Saffela - 05/25/2009
- I loved it!
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- Fantastic Nightmares - 05/24/2009
- *sniff* that was so... awesome... I'm actually crying here. And I'm not the one the sentimental type... seriously.
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- alainlalaland - 04/09/2009
- The plot line is pretty decent, but it seriously needs some more detail and a little editorial love. Have somebody edit it and then repost. Let me know if you put a new one up and I'll be happy to rate high!
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- Renesemee_710 - 04/09/2009
- i think it was cool!!
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