- by Disabledaccountplz18 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 01/28/2010 |
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- Title: Jade
- Artist: Disabledaccountplz18
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Description:
I was bored and wondered if you can you give me criticism and some tips
Be harmless plz..... - Date: 01/28/2010
- Tags: jade
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Comments (1 Comments)
- KikuMizu - 01/28/2010
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I cannot read the writing well. It might help if the background was in a darker color. And something is flashing behind her back so I am curious to what it is. And the spear looks pretty tiny; maybe make the pole thicker?
Other than that, I like the concept and the shading (big fan of shading in general because I can't do it well) and the face isn't bad either. The theme is visable and easy to pick out so I give it a good rating. - Report As Spam
