- by KitMinx9020 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: My Avi Drawn
- Artist: KitMinx9020
- Description: My first entry....I drew my avi when I had all of that equipped... um... comment please. And um tell me where I might be able to improve...? I guess... uh...
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: drawn kiwazaki123
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Comments (6 Comments)
- KitMinx9020 - 10/25/2009
- ha..you're a little late... check out my more recent drawings and critique them..
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- Kyootan - 10/13/2009
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Nice drawing, but maybe a bit stiff?
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- CutiE4LiFe4 - 06/22/2009
- cool drawing
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- Aizi - 05/23/2009
- It looks a little too flat
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- KitMinx9020 - 12/31/2008
- <nods> thanks i'll experiment with shading a bit more but i'm not sure how i'll make it more loose >_<;;;; i'll figure it out tho. thanks for the comment
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- midnightangelforever - 12/31/2008
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The outline and basic sturcture of it is well done. You should experiment with shading. See how the hair looks just like a black mass, try and and different shades of black instead of jsut plain black. Also try and make the character more loose. She is to stiff which dosen't make her look lifelike. The eyes look good.
Overall, nicely done! >.< - Report As Spam
