- Title: Silmeria Valkyrie (Not Done)
- Artist: M3497109
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Description:
Silmeria! This is the first time I've drawn her, actually. (If you want to know, I've never drawn Hrist, but I draw/doodle Lenneth all the time). As you can tell, I'm no where near finishing. Done in pencil and pen. (Why yes, I copied the desciption from my DA!) Oh, and the full size one is on my DA; Gaia's max size for pictures is tiny.
I REALLY REALLY REALLY want criticism since I haven't finished yet--that way, I can make changes without having to redraw the picture - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: silmeria valkyrie done
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sastahio - 12/25/2008
- i like it but her second eye, the one to the right, the way you look at the picture from here, has a smaller brow or less thick. the chin cheek part is also kinda too out from the face so you have like a blank spot next to the nose. but then again, i'm not an art critique so you don't have to listen to my comments. lol
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- M3497109 - 12/12/2008
- Thanks for your comments!
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- BarnOwl6-5 - 12/09/2008
- I like it! It will be better once it's finished.
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- Pop Tart 17 - 12/08/2008
- its okay, love the games
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- Aprico - 12/08/2008
- It's great, but work on the mouth. :]
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- ii-Sc3nic Rawr-ii - 12/07/2008
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okay here is some critisim!!! XD
un finished... even for unfinished the face just looks really weird the mouth should be a little lower. and since you have so much 'eye lash' or something on your left eye i would put more on the right. if those are feathers in the helmet make them look more like feathers and put some more detail into it! i'd say more but i need to show to explain... - Report As Spam
- M3497109 - 12/07/2008
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Thank you!!
I'll take all of your advice! - Report As Spam
