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  • Before the Kiss
  • Title: Before the Kiss
  • Artist: Youko Sakura
  • Description: Please be gentle with this one, I've spent forever drawing and coloring this. I'm into Kurama/Shizuru a lot.
  • Date: 11/26/2008
  • Tags: kurama shizuru kiss yuyuhakusho
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Izzy_Beth45856 - 12/06/2010
  • you have the right idea... some proportions are wrong, and some things, like arms and hands need worked on... th hair is wonderful, and I like it a lot if not for a few small things...
  • luv_tink - 04/27/2009
  • Pretty good, like the technique. But some problems: his forearm is way too thick, her wrist should be smaller with a gradual thinning of her forearm, and I agree that his eye should be on her (or closed)
  • XxFroggieLuverxX - 04/26/2009
  • its very good, but a few things:
    1: he sort of looks like a vampire...
    2: u should focus his eye on her, not the camera
    3: i couldnt tell that it was shizuru until i read the description...
    2/5
  • Eclipse13579 - 04/09/2009
  • I just have to say, you did a job with the actual shapeing of these people's bodies. But I found 2 things wrong though, 1.the fingers look kinda like sausages, they're too thick. 2. You went into too much detail on the mouths, it's distracting.
  • Katanas Blade - 03/28/2009
  • I'll be as gentle as I can, but, the contrast is too high for the heavy brush strokes you've used. They look thick, like cabbage patch dolls. The hair is colored quite nicely.
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