- by the ebony rose |
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- | Submitted on 08/02/2009 |
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- Title: Girl In tears
- Artist: the ebony rose
- Description: Ok this is my first paint drawing. I know it's not the best but I want to see what others think of it. Criticize yes but DO NOT TRASH. Tell me what I can work on and do better. Don't just say I suck.
- Date: 08/02/2009
- Tags: girl tears
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Comments (2 Comments)
- kiki2blue - 08/04/2009
- rm... I would work on the face shape slightly. It's very shaky. I would make the eye a little bit smaller (even though I'm guessing she's supposed to be wide-eyed). Maybe add some shine to the hair? also, nice attempt at shading, the shading on the neck looks nice, and maybe do it for the rest of the face? (You are usually supposed to shade with every part of hair that hangs down on the face) Paint is hard to use so definitely good for a fi
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- minsco - 08/02/2009
- It's different. I like how you did the hair, maybe an outline would be good. I like the eye, but you could have more detail. Other then that I guess proportions like in the neck and shoulders is a little off and the eye maybe shouldn't be so high up. Sorry if I sound like a know it all or something. I'm tired and I tend to ramble. Nice work and keep it up. ^^ i like your style. [dang I wrote a lot]
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