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  • Title: GASP!!
  • Artist: Wicked Crud
  • Description: Some of the parts a little screwy, but I just wanted to see what others thought. And personally, I think the little mistakes in a piece helps make it better.
    First-time submitter, so try not to be TOO harsh, but constructive criticism is appreciated. =D
  • Date: 11/27/2008
  • Tags: gasp darkred black purple
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • the_darkness_sword - 02/22/2009
  • Hmm, good. But work on the face perportion, the lips look a little off. Also the right upper arm looks bent. Oh the legs also don't have enough definition, And the waist looks a little too low. Plus, add a little more shading. Other than that, good ^^
  • They are always watching - 12/20/2008
  • As a fellow artist, I know how difficult hands and feet are to draw. Seriously, I hate them. If you ever see my work, you'll see that I try to avoid drawing them XD Anyways, I think you did a wonderful job on them. I like the outfit she's wearing ^_^ Her face and hair could use some work though and the whole thing could be shaded more, but otherwise, I like this piece. Great job ^_^
  • Wicked Crud - 11/30/2008
  • Thank you for your comments! =) Even the ones that aren't all like "OMG, FRAKIN' AMAZING!" are helpful to me.
    Especially gambitartist-'s comment. I'll remember that next time I draw a dress like that.
  • gambitartist - 11/29/2008
  • i think one of the biggest things i'd start with, is that it'd be nice to see a larger version of the image if possible. i really love her pose, though her right (our left) arm seems a bit long. also, you might want to look at some similar dress patterns and see how the fabric lays for that kind of a dress cut. it might almost be an idea to include a hint of petticoats or something to show what's holding the dress out.
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